Hello, I'm Azealia911 and I'll be reviewing this good article nomination. I'll be posting my review soon.
Azealia911talk 13:09, 8 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Good article criteria #6 reads "Illustrated, if possible, by images" while the artowork is good, it would be even better if we could get another related image at the lower-end of the article, perhaps of the song's writers and a caption stating just that.
Done. Included the image of Samuel Bayer who directed the music video. I didn't use Rob's image since it is used in "
Let Yourself Go".
You don't have to repeatedly cite the same reference if it's all backing up one paragraph, therefore reference 4 can be reduced to being cited once not thrice.
Done - see below.
Please remove statements from this section not backed up by reliable sources. While conclusions such as "It depicts a white stereo radio-cassette recorder with two skulls in place of speakers" are acceptable because you're just describing the artwork, claims such as "The cover art follows the style of those of ¡Uno!, ¡Dos!, and ¡Tré!" and "The skulls are black with pink crosses across the their eyes in a similar style to the artwork used on the ecovers of ¡Uno!, ¡Dos!, and ¡Tré!" are
your opinion and should therefore be either backed up by reliable sources, or removed.
Removed the entire section, as was suggested in other GARs also. Done.
Music video
Add (2004) after American Idiot.
Done.
"The band announced the release of the clip; a teaser video was uploaded" → "The band announced the release of the clip with a teaser video which was uploaded"
Done.
Critical reception
Calling should not be presented like this, but "like this", you should also use the full title of the song.
Done.
"was first" → "came first"
Done.
"Gigwise said" in such cases, please mention who from the publication made that comment, in this case David Renshaw.
Please employ the use of ! scope="row" in the listings.
Done.
There's a singlechart template for UK Zobbel, I can't seem to find it on the template page, but I'm using it in one of my
drafts, of which you can use as an example.
Status: On-hold for seven days while the article is improved. Give me a buzz if you need any help and/or extra time.
Azealia911talk 22:37, 8 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Thank you for the good comments. I will get around the unaddressed issues in a while. Best, Yash! 00:50, 10 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Azealia911, let me know if there is anything else needed to be done. Cheers, Yash! 05:45, 14 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Hello, I'm Azealia911 and I'll be reviewing this good article nomination. I'll be posting my review soon.
Azealia911talk 13:09, 8 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Good article criteria #6 reads "Illustrated, if possible, by images" while the artowork is good, it would be even better if we could get another related image at the lower-end of the article, perhaps of the song's writers and a caption stating just that.
Done. Included the image of Samuel Bayer who directed the music video. I didn't use Rob's image since it is used in "
Let Yourself Go".
You don't have to repeatedly cite the same reference if it's all backing up one paragraph, therefore reference 4 can be reduced to being cited once not thrice.
Done - see below.
Please remove statements from this section not backed up by reliable sources. While conclusions such as "It depicts a white stereo radio-cassette recorder with two skulls in place of speakers" are acceptable because you're just describing the artwork, claims such as "The cover art follows the style of those of ¡Uno!, ¡Dos!, and ¡Tré!" and "The skulls are black with pink crosses across the their eyes in a similar style to the artwork used on the ecovers of ¡Uno!, ¡Dos!, and ¡Tré!" are
your opinion and should therefore be either backed up by reliable sources, or removed.
Removed the entire section, as was suggested in other GARs also. Done.
Music video
Add (2004) after American Idiot.
Done.
"The band announced the release of the clip; a teaser video was uploaded" → "The band announced the release of the clip with a teaser video which was uploaded"
Done.
Critical reception
Calling should not be presented like this, but "like this", you should also use the full title of the song.
Done.
"was first" → "came first"
Done.
"Gigwise said" in such cases, please mention who from the publication made that comment, in this case David Renshaw.
Please employ the use of ! scope="row" in the listings.
Done.
There's a singlechart template for UK Zobbel, I can't seem to find it on the template page, but I'm using it in one of my
drafts, of which you can use as an example.
Status: On-hold for seven days while the article is improved. Give me a buzz if you need any help and/or extra time.
Azealia911talk 22:37, 8 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Thank you for the good comments. I will get around the unaddressed issues in a while. Best, Yash! 00:50, 10 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Azealia911, let me know if there is anything else needed to be done. Cheers, Yash! 05:45, 14 January 2016 (UTC)reply