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Reviewer: Aven13 ( talk · contribs) 14:21, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
I can do this review. I started with a major grammar clean up, so if anything I've written compromises your intent, please let me know. It is currently not GA-Status, but we can work to get it that way.
That's all I have for this moment, but I'm sure to come back with more. Let's get started! Aven13 14:21, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
Here's my proposed layout for the article:
BACKGROUND
Subsection: FAMILY
EARLY LIFE
APOLOGY MISSION
Subsection: BACKGROUND (the section about Gribedoyev's death will be incorporated here)
Subsection: TRAVELOGUE
LATER LIFE
IN POPULAR CULTURE
More to come soon. Aven13 18:52, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
I'm sorry, but this article does not meet the GA criteria, and I doubt it can be cleaned up to the extent needed in a timely manner. The images and sources are fantastic, but the prose and the organization of the article just aren't there yet. I would suggest maybe asking someone from the Guild of Copy Editors to proof the page, and then renominating it in the future. Good luck! Aven13 14:32, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Aven13 ( talk · contribs) 14:21, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
I can do this review. I started with a major grammar clean up, so if anything I've written compromises your intent, please let me know. It is currently not GA-Status, but we can work to get it that way.
That's all I have for this moment, but I'm sure to come back with more. Let's get started! Aven13 14:21, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
Here's my proposed layout for the article:
BACKGROUND
Subsection: FAMILY
EARLY LIFE
APOLOGY MISSION
Subsection: BACKGROUND (the section about Gribedoyev's death will be incorporated here)
Subsection: TRAVELOGUE
LATER LIFE
IN POPULAR CULTURE
More to come soon. Aven13 18:52, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
I'm sorry, but this article does not meet the GA criteria, and I doubt it can be cleaned up to the extent needed in a timely manner. The images and sources are fantastic, but the prose and the organization of the article just aren't there yet. I would suggest maybe asking someone from the Guild of Copy Editors to proof the page, and then renominating it in the future. Good luck! Aven13 14:32, 9 May 2021 (UTC)