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Reviewer: Nkon21 ( talk · contribs) 16:42, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
I have probably travelled through this station 1,000 times when I was at NUS haha. Review coming soon. ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 16:42, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
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on 8 October that year→ on 8 October of that year
a multimedia work Poetry Mix-Up by Mixed Reality Lab of NUS is displayed at this station→ Poetry Mix-Up, a multimedia work installed by Mixed Reality Lab of NUS, is displayed at this station
Commuters at the station could send an SMS to generate a poem, and the poem would be displayed on a screen situated at the station’s lift shaft→ Commuters at the station are able to generate a poem via a SMS message, which will then be displayed on a screen situated at the station's lift shaft
The artwork is intended for commuters to be more aware of their surroundings apart from their phones while reviving poetic expression→ The artwork installation is intended to remind commuters to be more aware of their surroundings especially when using mobile devices, while at the same time aiming to revive poetic expression
The article is not long overall so these should be quick fixes. Best, ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 22:07, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
@ Nkon21: addressed above comments. As for one-north vs One-North, the first mention was when it still kept the capitalisation, until they dropped it.--05:47, 7 October 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Nkon21 ( talk · contribs) 16:42, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
I have probably travelled through this station 1,000 times when I was at NUS haha. Review coming soon. ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 16:42, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
on 8 October that year→ on 8 October of that year
a multimedia work Poetry Mix-Up by Mixed Reality Lab of NUS is displayed at this station→ Poetry Mix-Up, a multimedia work installed by Mixed Reality Lab of NUS, is displayed at this station
Commuters at the station could send an SMS to generate a poem, and the poem would be displayed on a screen situated at the station’s lift shaft→ Commuters at the station are able to generate a poem via a SMS message, which will then be displayed on a screen situated at the station's lift shaft
The artwork is intended for commuters to be more aware of their surroundings apart from their phones while reviving poetic expression→ The artwork installation is intended to remind commuters to be more aware of their surroundings especially when using mobile devices, while at the same time aiming to revive poetic expression
The article is not long overall so these should be quick fixes. Best, ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 22:07, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
@ Nkon21: addressed above comments. As for one-north vs One-North, the first mention was when it still kept the capitalisation, until they dropped it.--05:47, 7 October 2023 (UTC)