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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 15:08, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this one!-- Alexandra IDV 15:08, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
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which can be regained by continuing to attack enemies and collecting the dropped Courage.What is courage in this game? Reading the previous sentence I was assuming it was something abstract, represented as building up a meter or something, but here it sounds like it's an actual object?
Plot
Taro tells her that,and
Toshi tells Kena that,? It looks incorrect to me.
Kena tells Toshi to forgive himself, and the spirit of him and Zajuro move on.- this reads strangely to me, and I had to re-read it once. Would suggest
, and his and Zajuro's spirits move on.
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with a scheduled for release in late 2020- ungrammatical
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I left a few comments, but they're all pretty minor. I'll put this on hold for seven days - please {{ ping}} me when you have addressed the above or if you have any questions!-- Alexandra IDV 06:41, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 15:08, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this one!-- Alexandra IDV 15:08, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
Images
Infobox
Lead
Gameplay
which can be regained by continuing to attack enemies and collecting the dropped Courage.What is courage in this game? Reading the previous sentence I was assuming it was something abstract, represented as building up a meter or something, but here it sounds like it's an actual object?
Plot
Taro tells her that,and
Toshi tells Kena that,? It looks incorrect to me.
Kena tells Toshi to forgive himself, and the spirit of him and Zajuro move on.- this reads strangely to me, and I had to re-read it once. Would suggest
, and his and Zajuro's spirits move on.
Development
Release
with a scheduled for release in late 2020- ungrammatical
Reception
Sales
References
I left a few comments, but they're all pretty minor. I'll put this on hold for seven days - please {{ ping}} me when you have addressed the above or if you have any questions!-- Alexandra IDV 06:41, 5 November 2021 (UTC)