"For his part, Houchen said that Clark "would shout, and rant and rave, and tactically he wasn't particularly brilliant."" wouldn't Clark be saying that about Houchen, or was Clark a player-manager? Just checking, since on the surface it sounds like something that would be said on a player rather than a manager, but if it was about his managerial style then it's fine as is.
"This made the Englishman a hate figure at Easter Road, along with Joe Tortolano, who had some Italian heritage." huh? This and the prior sentence is iffy as it notes this issue yet there's no details about it in the article.
Looks good. Last thing I saw is that the name and birthdate don't need to be reffed in the infobox, but if you want to keep them there there's nothing against that. I'll pass this article as a GA.
WizardmanOperation Big Bear15:53, 24 June 2012 (UTC)reply
"For his part, Houchen said that Clark "would shout, and rant and rave, and tactically he wasn't particularly brilliant."" wouldn't Clark be saying that about Houchen, or was Clark a player-manager? Just checking, since on the surface it sounds like something that would be said on a player rather than a manager, but if it was about his managerial style then it's fine as is.
"This made the Englishman a hate figure at Easter Road, along with Joe Tortolano, who had some Italian heritage." huh? This and the prior sentence is iffy as it notes this issue yet there's no details about it in the article.
Looks good. Last thing I saw is that the name and birthdate don't need to be reffed in the infobox, but if you want to keep them there there's nothing against that. I'll pass this article as a GA.
WizardmanOperation Big Bear15:53, 24 June 2012 (UTC)reply