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Reviewer: Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contribs) 12:44, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
I'm currently busy with real-life activities, but since this nomination has been sitting for a while, I'd just like to leave some preliminary comments:
Every statement is sourced and the writing is clear, so this should pass once the issues I've raised above are addressed. Narutolovehinata5 t c csd new 12:44, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
Bloop, I'm going to slide in per the ping and per previous heavy involvement in the development of this article. To address @ Narutolovehinata5:'s concernes
As Tinor said, I'm very busy, but real life is clearing up, so I'll probably be more active in the near future. And I'll try to help address any concerns. ~Cheers, Ten Ton Parasol 02:09, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay in replying, I got caught up with real-life matters again. But anyway, the lede has been expanded to a suitable length, every statement is sourced, and the article appears to be comprehensive enough given the sources available. Pass. Narutolovehinata5 t c csd new 14:10, 29 October 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contribs) 12:44, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
I'm currently busy with real-life activities, but since this nomination has been sitting for a while, I'd just like to leave some preliminary comments:
Every statement is sourced and the writing is clear, so this should pass once the issues I've raised above are addressed. Narutolovehinata5 t c csd new 12:44, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
Bloop, I'm going to slide in per the ping and per previous heavy involvement in the development of this article. To address @ Narutolovehinata5:'s concernes
As Tinor said, I'm very busy, but real life is clearing up, so I'll probably be more active in the near future. And I'll try to help address any concerns. ~Cheers, Ten Ton Parasol 02:09, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay in replying, I got caught up with real-life matters again. But anyway, the lede has been expanded to a suitable length, every statement is sourced, and the article appears to be comprehensive enough given the sources available. Pass. Narutolovehinata5 t c csd new 14:10, 29 October 2016 (UTC)