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GA Review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
All images are tagged correctly.
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Images are provided, appropriate, and have suitable captions.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Pass!
Comments
"...fighting over a tennis racquet, which Cole broke, which was Rex's", wasn't the tennis racquet Hannah's?
The entire casting section of the article needs to be re-written. The entire section is written like this: This person who was cast as this person, this person who was cast as this person, this person who was cast as this person". You use the word "who" too many times and the paragraph (to me) sounds really weird.
I fixed some other issues regarding the wording of the article. The article will be on hold for 7 days to allow improvements to be made as well to see if the article undergoes any major changes. If you have any questions, feel free to leave them here or on my talk page.--
Dom497 (
talk)
17:22, 23 June 2012 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Television, a collaborative effort to develop and improve Wikipedia articles about
television programs. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page where you can
join the discussion.
To improve this article, please refer to the
style guidelines for the type of work.TelevisionWikipedia:WikiProject TelevisionTemplate:WikiProject Televisiontelevision articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject United States, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics relating to the
United States of America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the ongoing discussions.
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Women, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
women on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.WomenWikipedia:WikiProject WomenTemplate:WikiProject WomenWikiProject Women articles
GA Review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
All images are tagged correctly.
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Images are provided, appropriate, and have suitable captions.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Pass!
Comments
"...fighting over a tennis racquet, which Cole broke, which was Rex's", wasn't the tennis racquet Hannah's?
The entire casting section of the article needs to be re-written. The entire section is written like this: This person who was cast as this person, this person who was cast as this person, this person who was cast as this person". You use the word "who" too many times and the paragraph (to me) sounds really weird.
I fixed some other issues regarding the wording of the article. The article will be on hold for 7 days to allow improvements to be made as well to see if the article undergoes any major changes. If you have any questions, feel free to leave them here or on my talk page.--
Dom497 (
talk)
17:22, 23 June 2012 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.