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Kali Puja is extremely famous in North Bengal in Dhupguri, Dinhata, Coochbehar — Preceding unsigned comment added by 223.187.244.61 ( talk) 02:59, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
Loud 2401:4900:3FB3:8FAF:0:0:E36:66BA ( talk) 23:58, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
Women 2401:4900:38C6:1C23:EBC1:D941:8EA6:24F ( talk) 12:19, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
Hi @ Skyerise, I noticed you had reverted my edit in the lead paragraph. With the exception of the first line, the lead paragraph was essentially one long sentence. I broke this up to improve its readability and syntax, and think that this change should be re-added. What was your reasoning for the reversion?
Diff-link: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Kali_Puja&type=revision&diff=1122079462&oldid=1122076352
Many thanks,
Starlights99 ( talk) 19:50, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
@ Skyerise, I felt the wording was fine but do understand the point. Instead of "This is especially prominent in the regions of..." we can re-phrase it to "The festival is especially popular in the regions of...". What do you think?
Hi everyone.
I have been looking to clean up this article and noticed that the legend section is written quiet poorly. There are issues with the sentence structure and phrasing. The section also has no sources at all. Would anyone like to help me in the search for some reliable sources? If not I suggest it be removed.
Thanks,
Starlights99 ( talk) 20:24, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
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Kali Puja is extremely famous in North Bengal in Dhupguri, Dinhata, Coochbehar — Preceding unsigned comment added by 223.187.244.61 ( talk) 02:59, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
Loud 2401:4900:3FB3:8FAF:0:0:E36:66BA ( talk) 23:58, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
Women 2401:4900:38C6:1C23:EBC1:D941:8EA6:24F ( talk) 12:19, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
Hi @ Skyerise, I noticed you had reverted my edit in the lead paragraph. With the exception of the first line, the lead paragraph was essentially one long sentence. I broke this up to improve its readability and syntax, and think that this change should be re-added. What was your reasoning for the reversion?
Diff-link: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Kali_Puja&type=revision&diff=1122079462&oldid=1122076352
Many thanks,
Starlights99 ( talk) 19:50, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
@ Skyerise, I felt the wording was fine but do understand the point. Instead of "This is especially prominent in the regions of..." we can re-phrase it to "The festival is especially popular in the regions of...". What do you think?
Hi everyone.
I have been looking to clean up this article and noticed that the legend section is written quiet poorly. There are issues with the sentence structure and phrasing. The section also has no sources at all. Would anyone like to help me in the search for some reliable sources? If not I suggest it be removed.
Thanks,
Starlights99 ( talk) 20:24, 30 November 2022 (UTC)