Perhaps reword " The film Kalyana Parisu (1959) was a hit and Sridhar started his own production house, Chitralaya Pictures" as The success of Kalyana Parisu (1959) led to Sridhar establishing his own production house, Chitralaya. Pictures
"Sachu, who began her career as a child actor, had started playing the heroine in Veerathirumagan (1961) and Annai (1962) when Sridhar offered her a comic role." -try "Sachu, who began her career as a child actor, played the heroine in early films such as Veerathirumagan (1961) and Annai (1962) until Sridhar offered her a comic role."
"The film was launched with a unique advertisement that said, "Do not look for any story in the film!"." - it's not clear to me why there was this advertisement, it seems like the context is missing? In who's opinion was it unique anyway?
"During filming, Gopu gave Ravichandran the lyrics of the song "Naalaam Naalaam", which were written like tongue-twisters in chaste Tamil, said they were his lines and asked him to memorise them." -awkward, try During filming, Gopu gave Ravichandran the lyrics of the song "Naalaam Naalaam", which were written like tongue-twisters in chaste Tamil. He claimed they were his own lines and asked him to memorise them."
"All lyrics written by Kannadasan. " looks like a short unsourced statement at the bottom of the above section, can you move under original tracklist with a * and source or something?
"In memory of Sridhar and Kadhalikka Neramillai, director Kamal Suburamaniam started a production house called Oho Productions." -when?
The claim by Kamal reads, "It all began at St. Joseph’s Boys Higher Secondary School in Coonoor. We were a bunch of kids who used to design posters which were well appreciated by all in the school. Slowly we started our own production house called ‘Oho Productions’ in memory of director Sridhar and his mega hit, Kadhalikka Neramillai." How can I remove ambiguity based on this source?
Kailash29792 (
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17:03, 8 September 2015 (UTC)reply
"All lyrics written by Kannadasan. " is still stray and unsourced. Can it be moved into the table or mentioned in a sentence further up?♦
Dr. Blofeld09:47, 9 September 2015 (UTC)reply
Perhaps reword " The film Kalyana Parisu (1959) was a hit and Sridhar started his own production house, Chitralaya Pictures" as The success of Kalyana Parisu (1959) led to Sridhar establishing his own production house, Chitralaya. Pictures
"Sachu, who began her career as a child actor, had started playing the heroine in Veerathirumagan (1961) and Annai (1962) when Sridhar offered her a comic role." -try "Sachu, who began her career as a child actor, played the heroine in early films such as Veerathirumagan (1961) and Annai (1962) until Sridhar offered her a comic role."
"The film was launched with a unique advertisement that said, "Do not look for any story in the film!"." - it's not clear to me why there was this advertisement, it seems like the context is missing? In who's opinion was it unique anyway?
"During filming, Gopu gave Ravichandran the lyrics of the song "Naalaam Naalaam", which were written like tongue-twisters in chaste Tamil, said they were his lines and asked him to memorise them." -awkward, try During filming, Gopu gave Ravichandran the lyrics of the song "Naalaam Naalaam", which were written like tongue-twisters in chaste Tamil. He claimed they were his own lines and asked him to memorise them."
"All lyrics written by Kannadasan. " looks like a short unsourced statement at the bottom of the above section, can you move under original tracklist with a * and source or something?
"In memory of Sridhar and Kadhalikka Neramillai, director Kamal Suburamaniam started a production house called Oho Productions." -when?
The claim by Kamal reads, "It all began at St. Joseph’s Boys Higher Secondary School in Coonoor. We were a bunch of kids who used to design posters which were well appreciated by all in the school. Slowly we started our own production house called ‘Oho Productions’ in memory of director Sridhar and his mega hit, Kadhalikka Neramillai." How can I remove ambiguity based on this source?
Kailash29792 (
talk)
17:03, 8 September 2015 (UTC)reply
"All lyrics written by Kannadasan. " is still stray and unsourced. Can it be moved into the table or mentioned in a sentence further up?♦
Dr. Blofeld09:47, 9 September 2015 (UTC)reply