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Reviewer: The Rambling Man ( talk · contribs) 21:32, 12 March 2021 (UTC) reply

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• "44.061" that's a thousandth of a mile, i.e. to the nearest 2 yards, is that level of accuracy real/necessary?
  •  Fixed I agree - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• How do I use ref 1 to verify that information?
  • You would have to get a copy. I just know this is done in most of the GA and FA road articles. - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:36, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• Three paras for the lead seems overkill, the article probably needs a maximum of two.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• What's a " military road" ? Is it just a road built by the military or exclusively for use by the military or something else?
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "tracks the traffic levels on its highways" it's odd, for me I'd expect to see the highway described to me before learning about how much traffic goes along it.
  • I added a few sentences, will this work? - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:36, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "12700" normally use a comma to separate thousands here.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "2.701 miles (4 km) " this is a bizarre conversion. To the nearest 160cm in miles but the nearest 1000m in km?
  • Should be fixed now? - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "begins at K-4 northeast" K-4 appears to be linked here although it's mentioned in the previous section.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "1.462 miles (2 km)" similar. Indeed if I double the miles I get 2.924 and double the km I get 4 km. Which above was 2.701 miles....
  • Should be fixed now? - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• ".75 miles" leading zero please.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "roughly .5 miles" likewise.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• There are several of these.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "Union Pacific Railway" isn't that Railroad?
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• " $11,125 was appropriated" inflate.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• I would {{ nowrap}} the road designations, e.g. I'm seeing K-7 as "K-" and then "7" on the following line which is undesirable.
  •  Fixed I agree. - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• Perry Lake is overlinked.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "ribbon cutting" needs a hyphen.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "US 54/ K-16 " etc, either spaced both sides or neither, but not just one.
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
• "1: 211,200" why space in this scale?
  •  Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply

That's it on first run. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:58, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply

• Ref 2, is broken? The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 19:57, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
  • Its an issue with KDOT's website because some days it works and some not, I've had the same problem. Next time it works I will archive it. Just don't know what to do about it today. - 420Traveler ( talk) 20:35, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
    • Ok, well I'll need to see it up and running (perhaps it's already been archived at archive.org?) before we can progress the review. Let me know. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:41, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply
      • It should be working now, KDOT must have added a new link and I changed the link. - 420Traveler ( talk) 22:10, 14 March 2021 (UTC) reply

Okay, content with this now. Promoting. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:15, 17 March 2021 (UTC) reply