I've reviewed a few of these, and they're relatively quick to do, so I'll go ahead and do a few more. Comments to come in the next day or so.
PCN02WPS (
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I've left comments about my concerns below, so I'll place this on hold for you to address them.
PCN02WPS (
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PCN02WPS: Everything should be fixed now, let me know if I missed anything -
420Traveler (
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Looks like it'd make more sense to have the citation for "1927-present" after "present" rather than after "1927"
I'm not able to add a reference for present, but the reference here refers to the establishment date. -
420Traveler (
talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)reply
"The highway continues north to an at-grade crossing with a BNSF Railway track then reaches an intersection with US-160." → add a comma after "track", and perhaps change to "and then".
"The highway continues north, crossing Slate Creek, before crossing into Sedgwick County." → a bit repetitive (emphasis is mine), consider rewording to eliminate one instance of "crossing"
"In a resolution approved on December 10, 1957 resolution, the overlap..." → remove bolded word but keep the comma after "December 10, 1957," per
MOS:DATECOMMA
I've reviewed a few of these, and they're relatively quick to do, so I'll go ahead and do a few more. Comments to come in the next day or so.
PCN02WPS (
talk |
contribs) 04:57, 29 March 2022 (UTC)reply
I've left comments about my concerns below, so I'll place this on hold for you to address them.
PCN02WPS (
talk |
contribs) 16:33, 29 March 2022 (UTC)reply
@
PCN02WPS: Everything should be fixed now, let me know if I missed anything -
420Traveler (
talk) 22:17, 29 March 2022 (UTC)reply
Looks like it'd make more sense to have the citation for "1927-present" after "present" rather than after "1927"
I'm not able to add a reference for present, but the reference here refers to the establishment date. -
420Traveler (
talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)reply
"The highway continues north to an at-grade crossing with a BNSF Railway track then reaches an intersection with US-160." → add a comma after "track", and perhaps change to "and then".
"The highway continues north, crossing Slate Creek, before crossing into Sedgwick County." → a bit repetitive (emphasis is mine), consider rewording to eliminate one instance of "crossing"
"In a resolution approved on December 10, 1957 resolution, the overlap..." → remove bolded word but keep the comma after "December 10, 1957," per
MOS:DATECOMMA