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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:K-249 (Kansas highway)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Harper J. Cole ( talk · contribs) 22:26, 6 April 2022 (UTC) reply


Hi, I'll take a look at this article.-- Harper J. Cole ( talk) 22:26, 6 April 2022 (UTC) reply

Lead

  • Is there a citation for the alternate name (Southwest Boulevard)?
  • I don't think you need to say that it's short right before giving the length - that's giving the same info twice (I'd drop the word "short" as it's less precise).
 Fixed I agree - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply

Route description

  • Is it a one-way road? Saying that it begins with the K-99 intersection implies that south to north is the only direction of travel. If it is two-way, perhaps begin the sentence with "When approached from the south..."
 Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
  • Instead of "soon reaches an intersection" and "soon curves back north", could approximate distances be given (one of your sources is a map with a scale)?
 Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply

History

  • It looks like the 2004 resolution was approved specifically by Secretary of Transportation Deb Miller - worth mentioning and linking to her page.
 Fixed Should be fixed now? - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply

References

  • Reference 1 doesn't work for me. This may due to my location (the UK), but worth checking out.
I will look for a different source. It works at times and then wont, we have been having trouble with it for months. - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply

Other

Should I add: [a] after Southwest Boulevard? - 420Traveler ( talk) 01:05, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
420Traveler I think Template:Distinguish could be used at the start for this. Harper J. Cole ( talk) 19:16, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
Harper J. Cole I think that template is only used to distinguish the title of an article. - 420Traveler ( talk) 21:29, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
420Traveler Ah, okay. Just a note should be fine, then.-- Harper J. Cole ( talk) 22:15, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
Harper J. Cole Added the footnote. - 420Traveler ( talk) 11:40, 8 April 2022 (UTC) reply

Summary

  • A short article, but you cover all the key information. I'll await your feedback on the comments above. Harper J. Cole ( talk) 23:10, 6 April 2022 (UTC) reply
Hi, I fixed most things, just have a few questions. - 420Traveler ( talk) 01:08, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
Thanks, I'm happy to pass this one now. Just the one slight issue with the erratic link on citation 1, but it does seem to work about 50% of the time, and your project are aware of the issue. I don't think we need to hold up passing the article.-- Harper J. Cole ( talk) 17:07, 8 April 2022 (UTC) reply


Cite error: There are <ref group=lower-alpha> tags or {{efn}} templates on this page, but the references will not show without a {{reflist|group=lower-alpha}} template or {{notelist}} template (see the help page).

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:K-249 (Kansas highway)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Harper J. Cole ( talk · contribs) 22:26, 6 April 2022 (UTC) reply


Hi, I'll take a look at this article.-- Harper J. Cole ( talk) 22:26, 6 April 2022 (UTC) reply

Lead

  • Is there a citation for the alternate name (Southwest Boulevard)?
  • I don't think you need to say that it's short right before giving the length - that's giving the same info twice (I'd drop the word "short" as it's less precise).
 Fixed I agree - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply

Route description

  • Is it a one-way road? Saying that it begins with the K-99 intersection implies that south to north is the only direction of travel. If it is two-way, perhaps begin the sentence with "When approached from the south..."
 Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
  • Instead of "soon reaches an intersection" and "soon curves back north", could approximate distances be given (one of your sources is a map with a scale)?
 Fixed - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply

History

  • It looks like the 2004 resolution was approved specifically by Secretary of Transportation Deb Miller - worth mentioning and linking to her page.
 Fixed Should be fixed now? - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply

References

  • Reference 1 doesn't work for me. This may due to my location (the UK), but worth checking out.
I will look for a different source. It works at times and then wont, we have been having trouble with it for months. - 420Traveler ( talk) 00:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply

Other

Should I add: [a] after Southwest Boulevard? - 420Traveler ( talk) 01:05, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
420Traveler I think Template:Distinguish could be used at the start for this. Harper J. Cole ( talk) 19:16, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
Harper J. Cole I think that template is only used to distinguish the title of an article. - 420Traveler ( talk) 21:29, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
420Traveler Ah, okay. Just a note should be fine, then.-- Harper J. Cole ( talk) 22:15, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
Harper J. Cole Added the footnote. - 420Traveler ( talk) 11:40, 8 April 2022 (UTC) reply

Summary

  • A short article, but you cover all the key information. I'll await your feedback on the comments above. Harper J. Cole ( talk) 23:10, 6 April 2022 (UTC) reply
Hi, I fixed most things, just have a few questions. - 420Traveler ( talk) 01:08, 7 April 2022 (UTC) reply
Thanks, I'm happy to pass this one now. Just the one slight issue with the erratic link on citation 1, but it does seem to work about 50% of the time, and your project are aware of the issue. I don't think we need to hold up passing the article.-- Harper J. Cole ( talk) 17:07, 8 April 2022 (UTC) reply


Cite error: There are <ref group=lower-alpha> tags or {{efn}} templates on this page, but the references will not show without a {{reflist|group=lower-alpha}} template or {{notelist}} template (see the help page).


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