"The highway then curves east as it passes through Ryus. The highway then curves southeast and" → I'm not sure how much you can do about this, but it's a touch repetitive (if you can't find a suitable rewording, don't worry about it)
I changed it a little. Do you think it would be better to change the word "curve" to "bends" or "transitions to"? -
420Traveler (
talk) 03:14, 5 March 2022 (UTC)reply
"...they determined that on average the traffic varied from..." → comma before and after "on average"
The references look good to me. Admittedly one of the shorter reviews I've ever done but also one of the shorter articles I've ever reviewed, I suppose. Placing on hold.
PCN02WPS (
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Changes you made are good with me, happy to pass this one as well! Well done.
PCN02WPS (
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contribs) 04:19, 5 March 2022 (UTC)reply
"The highway then curves east as it passes through Ryus. The highway then curves southeast and" → I'm not sure how much you can do about this, but it's a touch repetitive (if you can't find a suitable rewording, don't worry about it)
I changed it a little. Do you think it would be better to change the word "curve" to "bends" or "transitions to"? -
420Traveler (
talk) 03:14, 5 March 2022 (UTC)reply
"...they determined that on average the traffic varied from..." → comma before and after "on average"
The references look good to me. Admittedly one of the shorter reviews I've ever done but also one of the shorter articles I've ever reviewed, I suppose. Placing on hold.
PCN02WPS (
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contribs) 02:41, 5 March 2022 (UTC)reply
Changes you made are good with me, happy to pass this one as well! Well done.
PCN02WPS (
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contribs) 04:19, 5 March 2022 (UTC)reply