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Did you know... that the cellar system(pictured) under the
Kőbánya district of
Budapest, Hungary, has served as a limestone quarry, a beer cellar, an aircraft engine factory, and a bicycle race venue?
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(b) it complies with the
Manual of Style guidelines for
lead sections,
layout,
words to watch,
fiction, and
list incorporation The lead section is a mess. The first paragraph is way to long (the text after "While intricate ..." should be separated in a new paragraph or better yet, deleted. There are too many citations for the reading to be smooth.
. Ok, corrected. The lead section is now in two neat paragraphs.
(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline
(b)
reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose)
(b) media are
relevant to the topic, and have
suitable captions subtitle of the image (Anton Dreher Sr. (id. Dréher Antal)) should be changed to something more informative, like "Anton Dreher Sr., austrian brewer, first wine brewer in the Cellar"
Mdob (
talk)
19:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)reply
A fact from Kőbánya cellar system appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 22 September 2017 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that the cellar system(pictured) under the
Kőbánya district of
Budapest, Hungary, has served as a limestone quarry, a beer cellar, an aircraft engine factory, and a bicycle race venue?
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(b) it complies with the
Manual of Style guidelines for
lead sections,
layout,
words to watch,
fiction, and
list incorporation The lead section is a mess. The first paragraph is way to long (the text after "While intricate ..." should be separated in a new paragraph or better yet, deleted. There are too many citations for the reading to be smooth.
. Ok, corrected. The lead section is now in two neat paragraphs.
(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline
(b)
reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose)
(b) media are
relevant to the topic, and have
suitable captions subtitle of the image (Anton Dreher Sr. (id. Dréher Antal)) should be changed to something more informative, like "Anton Dreher Sr., austrian brewer, first wine brewer in the Cellar"
Mdob (
talk)
19:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)reply