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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 22:14, 30 August 2022 (UTC)
I'll review this.
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Images are appropriately tagged; sources are reliable.
I've read through and the text is fine; I could pass this now but I'd like to hear your thoughts on the two points above. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 00:06, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
I'm going to go ahead and pass this; I have a follow up comment but it doesn't affect GA status. I would suggest keeping subheadings according to a single organizing scheme; chronological would seem the most natural. The sections do feel a bit too short to me, and if you go with "Early depictions", "Pulp era", and "Modern depictions", plus the Moons section, I think there wouldn't be too much of a wall-of-text effect. But not necessary for GA. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 00:42, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 22:14, 30 August 2022 (UTC)
I'll review this.
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22:14, 30 August 2022 (UTC)
Images are appropriately tagged; sources are reliable.
I've read through and the text is fine; I could pass this now but I'd like to hear your thoughts on the two points above. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 00:06, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
I'm going to go ahead and pass this; I have a follow up comment but it doesn't affect GA status. I would suggest keeping subheadings according to a single organizing scheme; chronological would seem the most natural. The sections do feel a bit too short to me, and if you go with "Early depictions", "Pulp era", and "Modern depictions", plus the Moons section, I think there wouldn't be too much of a wall-of-text effect. But not necessary for GA. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 00:42, 31 August 2022 (UTC)