A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
"because of her passion for folk art, this initial display led to the first official public exhibition of folk art in a public showing presentation." Please forgive me, but I am unclear what "presentation" means in this context.
Done Changed to - Because of her passion for folk art, this initial display led to the first official public exhibition of folk art in a demonstration.
Except for the one referencing issue and a question on one sentence, this is a great nomination for GA! Well done on your hard work. Please clarify the sentence and correct the reference, after which I will check it, if that's good then I am happy to pass. -
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01:33, 1 July 2021 (UTC)reply
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
"because of her passion for folk art, this initial display led to the first official public exhibition of folk art in a public showing presentation." Please forgive me, but I am unclear what "presentation" means in this context.
Done Changed to - Because of her passion for folk art, this initial display led to the first official public exhibition of folk art in a demonstration.
Except for the one referencing issue and a question on one sentence, this is a great nomination for GA! Well done on your hard work. Please clarify the sentence and correct the reference, after which I will check it, if that's good then I am happy to pass. -
Aussie Article Writer (
talk)
01:33, 1 July 2021 (UTC)reply