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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 20:15, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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He played college basketball for Michigan as a walk-on and a 3x Academic All-Big Ten honoree.missing "was" after "and"
Because his fatherseems extraneous at best. This could probably be summed up to
Because of the connections his father made, Bartelstein met many famous athletes and even worked out with Mo Williams, Bobby Simmons, and Kirk Hinrich.
TonyTheTiger, at this time I am leaning towards a fail due to 3B, namely that this article is excessively long and too detailed. However, I am happy to give you a few days to see if you can focus it up. Happy to come back and re-review after. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:42, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 20:15, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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He played college basketball for Michigan as a walk-on and a 3x Academic All-Big Ten honoree.missing "was" after "and"
Because his fatherseems extraneous at best. This could probably be summed up to
Because of the connections his father made, Bartelstein met many famous athletes and even worked out with Mo Williams, Bobby Simmons, and Kirk Hinrich.
TonyTheTiger, at this time I am leaning towards a fail due to 3B, namely that this article is excessively long and too detailed. However, I am happy to give you a few days to see if you can focus it up. Happy to come back and re-review after. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:42, 24 August 2023 (UTC)