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In May 2017, the U.S. Department of Justice reached an $89 million settlement with the bank involving its reverse mortgage products and compliance with HUD foreclosure requirements, which requires banks to complete resolution and foreclosure activities within an aggressive timeline. [1]
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In May 2017, the U.S. Department of Justice reached an $89 million settlement with the CIT [2] involving a portfolio of reverse mortgage products acquired from the failed IndyMac Federal Bank [3] and compliance with HUD foreclosure requirements, which requires banks to complete resolution and foreclosure activities within an aggressive timeline. [4]
Explanation of issue: Provides additional document clarity on what bank settled with DoJ and what the source of the reverse mortgages was. References provided.
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He is also a graduate of the School of Credit and Financial Management, a four-week program offered by the National Association of Credit Management, which was held at Dartmouth College at the time he attended in 1992. [1] [2]
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He is also a graduate of the School of Credit and Financial Management, a three-year program [3] offered by the National Association of Credit Management, which was held at Dartmouth College at the time he attended in 1992. [4] [5]
Explanation of issue: The edit corrects an error in fact repeated from the 2017 news article. The mentioned program in 1992 was three-year program, not a four-week program. In addition to the classroom time, the program included longer-term projects and assignments. Event today the program is a two-year program with four-weeks of in-class instruction. Program materials from 1992 are not online but available from National Association of Credit Management. This edit is supported by the 1991-1992 program brochure, pages 1 and 3. Happy to provide a copy.
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In addition, the Ottings are the primary owners of Southern Highlands Golf Club, Tennis Facility, and Spa. [1]
Explanation of issue: The addition clarifies detail of public persona's interests and is well-documented from public record including referenced in the cited article from May 2018.
References supporting change: [2]
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Information to be added or removed: In May 2017, the U.S. Department of Justice reached an $89 million settlement with the bank involving its reverse mortgage products and compliance with HUD foreclosure requirements, which requires banks to complete resolution and foreclosure activities within an aggressive timeline.
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In May 2017, the U.S. Department of Justice reached an $89 million settlement with CIT Bank involving its reverse mortgage portfolio, acquired via the failed IndyMac Federal Savings Association, for compliance with HUD foreclosure requirements, which require banks to complete resolution and foreclosure activities within an aggressive timeline.
Explanation of issue: Clarifies which bank the DoJ action was against (CIT Bank) and that the portfolio of reverse mortgage products was acquired via the failed IndyMac Federal Savings Bank, which became part of OneWest Bank. References supporting change: https://www.reuters.com/article/us-financial-freedom-settlement/mnuchins-former-bank-in-89-million-settlement-over-reverse-mortgages-idUSKCN18C2FL and the original citation of https://www.justice.gov/opa/pr/financial-freedom-settles-alleged-liability-servicing-federally-insured-reverse-mortgage
Hubbardbk ( talk) 19:19, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
Information to be added or removed: Add to bottom of Personal Life section: In addition to their other business and real estate, they are majority owners of the Southern Highlands golf course, tennis facility, and spa. Explanation of issue: Clarifies ongoing interests of public figure. References supporting change: See http://www.allgov.com/news/top-stories/comptroller-of-the-currency-who-is-joseph-otting-170717?news=860237 and https://vegasinc.lasvegassun.com/news/2018/jan/02/qa-banking-regulator-with-local-ties-describes-nom/
Hubbardbk ( talk) 19:41, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
Information to be added or removed: Revise "He is also a graduate of the School of Credit and Financial Management, a four-week program offered by the National Association of Credit Management, which was held at Dartmouth College at the time he attended in 1992."
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He is also a graduate of the School of Credit and Financial Management, a three-year program offered by the National Association of Credit Management, which was held at Dartmouth College at the time he completed the program in 1992.
I verified directly with the National Association of Credit Management that in 1992, this program was three-years long. That changed in 1994. I can provide documentation from the Association but details of the program 27 years ago are not on line.
Explanation of issue: This edit corrects an error in fact added by a previous contributor. References supporting change: I have original course materials documenting the length of the program and can provide. They are not online.
Hubbardbk ( talk) 19:49, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
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In May 2017, the U.S. Department of Justice reached an $89 million settlement with the bank involving its reverse mortgage products and compliance with HUD foreclosure requirements, which requires banks to complete resolution and foreclosure activities within an aggressive timeline. [1]
with
In May 2017, the U.S. Department of Justice reached an $89 million settlement with the CIT [2] involving a portfolio of reverse mortgage products acquired from the failed IndyMac Federal Bank [3] and compliance with HUD foreclosure requirements, which requires banks to complete resolution and foreclosure activities within an aggressive timeline. [4]
Explanation of issue: Provides additional document clarity on what bank settled with DoJ and what the source of the reverse mortgages was. References provided.
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He is also a graduate of the School of Credit and Financial Management, a four-week program offered by the National Association of Credit Management, which was held at Dartmouth College at the time he attended in 1992. [1] [2]
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He is also a graduate of the School of Credit and Financial Management, a three-year program [3] offered by the National Association of Credit Management, which was held at Dartmouth College at the time he attended in 1992. [4] [5]
Explanation of issue: The edit corrects an error in fact repeated from the 2017 news article. The mentioned program in 1992 was three-year program, not a four-week program. In addition to the classroom time, the program included longer-term projects and assignments. Event today the program is a two-year program with four-weeks of in-class instruction. Program materials from 1992 are not online but available from National Association of Credit Management. This edit is supported by the 1991-1992 program brochure, pages 1 and 3. Happy to provide a copy.
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Information to be added or removed: Please add the following to the bottom of the Personal life section as a new paragraph--
In addition, the Ottings are the primary owners of Southern Highlands Golf Club, Tennis Facility, and Spa. [1]
Explanation of issue: The addition clarifies detail of public persona's interests and is well-documented from public record including referenced in the cited article from May 2018.
References supporting change: [2]
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Information to be added or removed: In May 2017, the U.S. Department of Justice reached an $89 million settlement with the bank involving its reverse mortgage products and compliance with HUD foreclosure requirements, which requires banks to complete resolution and foreclosure activities within an aggressive timeline.
to
In May 2017, the U.S. Department of Justice reached an $89 million settlement with CIT Bank involving its reverse mortgage portfolio, acquired via the failed IndyMac Federal Savings Association, for compliance with HUD foreclosure requirements, which require banks to complete resolution and foreclosure activities within an aggressive timeline.
Explanation of issue: Clarifies which bank the DoJ action was against (CIT Bank) and that the portfolio of reverse mortgage products was acquired via the failed IndyMac Federal Savings Bank, which became part of OneWest Bank. References supporting change: https://www.reuters.com/article/us-financial-freedom-settlement/mnuchins-former-bank-in-89-million-settlement-over-reverse-mortgages-idUSKCN18C2FL and the original citation of https://www.justice.gov/opa/pr/financial-freedom-settles-alleged-liability-servicing-federally-insured-reverse-mortgage
Hubbardbk ( talk) 19:19, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
Information to be added or removed: Add to bottom of Personal Life section: In addition to their other business and real estate, they are majority owners of the Southern Highlands golf course, tennis facility, and spa. Explanation of issue: Clarifies ongoing interests of public figure. References supporting change: See http://www.allgov.com/news/top-stories/comptroller-of-the-currency-who-is-joseph-otting-170717?news=860237 and https://vegasinc.lasvegassun.com/news/2018/jan/02/qa-banking-regulator-with-local-ties-describes-nom/
Hubbardbk ( talk) 19:41, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
Information to be added or removed: Revise "He is also a graduate of the School of Credit and Financial Management, a four-week program offered by the National Association of Credit Management, which was held at Dartmouth College at the time he attended in 1992."
to
He is also a graduate of the School of Credit and Financial Management, a three-year program offered by the National Association of Credit Management, which was held at Dartmouth College at the time he completed the program in 1992.
I verified directly with the National Association of Credit Management that in 1992, this program was three-years long. That changed in 1994. I can provide documentation from the Association but details of the program 27 years ago are not on line.
Explanation of issue: This edit corrects an error in fact added by a previous contributor. References supporting change: I have original course materials documenting the length of the program and can provide. They are not online.
Hubbardbk ( talk) 19:49, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
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In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Joseph Otting article. Using CS1, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:
In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. |
Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo 21:30, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
Notes
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Guideline: It is normal practice to defer to the style used by the first major contributor or adopted by the consensus of editors already working on the page, unless a change in consensus has been achieved. If the article you are editing is already using a particular citation style, you should follow it.