"Anabo attended Armijo High School before playing college football at Vallejo Junior College " - before going on to play college football at
Vallejo Junior College Done
"In 1961, Anabo transferred to Fresno State to play for the Bulldogs" - mention it was the Fresno State Bulldogs and wikilink it since it is the first time it will be mentioned in the prose Done
"Anabo was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset over the University of the Pacific in the final seconds of the game." - He was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset victory of the University of the Pacific in the game's final seconds Done
"Fresno State defeated Bowling Green 36–6" - reword to Fresno State defeated the
Bowling Green Falcons 36–6 Done
Wikilink United Press International Done
"In 1962, Anabo and Carter were described as the "best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast". - described by whom?
The source doesn't specifically say. It says "Their pair of quarterbacks, Jon Anabo and Beau Carter, are billed as the best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast" Thoughts?
WikiOriginal-9 (
talk)
07:32, 16 November 2017 (UTC)reply
Add a wikilink to touchdown again to help those unfamilar with football Done
Professional career
Wikilink the first mention of Cleveland Browns, the Edmonton Eskimos and the Canadian Football League in the prose Done
Perhaps an explanation of what position Walter Roberts played in will help non-football fans Done
Yes, everything in the infobox comes from that source. Specifically, the pages in the 140ish range for the articles currently under review (whichever one is actually cited for the statistics in the article). ~
Rob13Talk22:07, 16 November 2017 (UTC)reply
"Anabo attended Armijo High School before playing college football at Vallejo Junior College " - before going on to play college football at
Vallejo Junior College Done
"In 1961, Anabo transferred to Fresno State to play for the Bulldogs" - mention it was the Fresno State Bulldogs and wikilink it since it is the first time it will be mentioned in the prose Done
"Anabo was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset over the University of the Pacific in the final seconds of the game." - He was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset victory of the University of the Pacific in the game's final seconds Done
"Fresno State defeated Bowling Green 36–6" - reword to Fresno State defeated the
Bowling Green Falcons 36–6 Done
Wikilink United Press International Done
"In 1962, Anabo and Carter were described as the "best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast". - described by whom?
The source doesn't specifically say. It says "Their pair of quarterbacks, Jon Anabo and Beau Carter, are billed as the best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast" Thoughts?
WikiOriginal-9 (
talk)
07:32, 16 November 2017 (UTC)reply
Add a wikilink to touchdown again to help those unfamilar with football Done
Professional career
Wikilink the first mention of Cleveland Browns, the Edmonton Eskimos and the Canadian Football League in the prose Done
Perhaps an explanation of what position Walter Roberts played in will help non-football fans Done
Yes, everything in the infobox comes from that source. Specifically, the pages in the 140ish range for the articles currently under review (whichever one is actually cited for the statistics in the article). ~
Rob13Talk22:07, 16 November 2017 (UTC)reply