Let's do this, although I'll hold off until the dust is settled from the House primary. That said, off the bat:
Queen of Hearts (
talk) 04:12, 14 May 2024 (UTC)reply
Thanks for reviewing! I’m hoping the primary doesn’t take as long as I think it might, but I also have a feeling that we won’t have to worry about that affecting the review of this page too much as the MD-02 primary will probably be called later tonight or early tomorrow.
Y2hyaXM (
talk) 10:53, 14 May 2024 (UTC)reply
I've also adjusted the lead to closer match what you've written in your review so far. Please let me know if anything else should be changed. Thanks again!
Y2hyaXM (
talk) 13:03, 14 May 2024 (UTC)reply
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Queen of Hearts Just a heads up, I'll be taking a brief break from May 26 to June 2, and will be unable to make any edits during that time. No rush, seeing as you're on break yourself, but I ask that you please do not continue your review until before/after that date range. Thanks again for reviewing!
Y2hyaXM (
talk) 15:50, 18 May 2024 (UTC)reply
I misread 26 as 28; seeing as it's the 25th, I'll continue after. Enjoy your wikibreak.
Queen of Hearts (
talk) 19:13, 25 May 2024 (UTC)reply
Lead
Lead is quite short; per
MOS:LEADSIZE, an article this long should generally have two or three paragraphs of lead.
also known by his nickname Johnny O and He previously served two terms in the Maryland House of Delegates representing District 6 don't need citations per
MOS:LEADCITE
Let's do this, although I'll hold off until the dust is settled from the House primary. That said, off the bat:
Queen of Hearts (
talk) 04:12, 14 May 2024 (UTC)reply
Thanks for reviewing! I’m hoping the primary doesn’t take as long as I think it might, but I also have a feeling that we won’t have to worry about that affecting the review of this page too much as the MD-02 primary will probably be called later tonight or early tomorrow.
Y2hyaXM (
talk) 10:53, 14 May 2024 (UTC)reply
I've also adjusted the lead to closer match what you've written in your review so far. Please let me know if anything else should be changed. Thanks again!
Y2hyaXM (
talk) 13:03, 14 May 2024 (UTC)reply
@
Queen of Hearts Just a heads up, I'll be taking a brief break from May 26 to June 2, and will be unable to make any edits during that time. No rush, seeing as you're on break yourself, but I ask that you please do not continue your review until before/after that date range. Thanks again for reviewing!
Y2hyaXM (
talk) 15:50, 18 May 2024 (UTC)reply
I misread 26 as 28; seeing as it's the 25th, I'll continue after. Enjoy your wikibreak.
Queen of Hearts (
talk) 19:13, 25 May 2024 (UTC)reply
Lead
Lead is quite short; per
MOS:LEADSIZE, an article this long should generally have two or three paragraphs of lead.
also known by his nickname Johnny O and He previously served two terms in the Maryland House of Delegates representing District 6 don't need citations per
MOS:LEADCITE