This has some stuff about a James Swoveland affirming to have ridden in Lambert's car in 1891, that might warrant mention.
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JPxG: Thanks for hint (nice catch). I have that article in my article already eleven times as Ref #4.--
Doug Coldwell (
talk) 21:50, 26 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Sorry, this one kind of fell off the radar. I will go through it in a bit. jp×g 04:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Y: Great, no action required.
: Not necessary but might be worth looking at.
N: Needs to be fixed.
Copyvio
Y Earwig's detector says everything is fine.
Stability
Y Article is quite stable. Has not been the subject of any controversy except from an IP address repeatedly adding stuff like "where he learned how to fly" and "harold".
POV
Minor amounts of general fluff like "That was a good thing, since", not a big deal.
NThere were about 300 horseless carriages built up to 1895,[4] but Lambert was the first with a functional working automobile that he created in 1891 Huh?
YRef 7 isn't accessible for me but I will try to get a hold of it somewhere. It isn't very load-bearing, so I will AGF.
Y Ref 8 looks good.
Y Ref 9 looks good.
Y Ref 10 looks good.
Y Refs 11 - 18 look good.
N Ref 19 is "newspaper clip "Oldest Resident of Ohio City" "Death Claims 1st Passenger of gasoline auto"". No year, no publication, no author, no link... :(
Done Removed, as other inline references in the paragraph cover the first accident.--
Doug Coldwell (
talk) 12:00, 28 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Y Ref 20 looks good.
Y Ref 21 looks good.
Ref 22 could do with a link.
Y Ref 23 looks good.
Conclusion
I have been a little consumed by tasks today, so might have to get around to finishing this tomorrow. jp×g 04:49, 27 March 2021 (UTC)reply
User:JPxG All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--
Doug Coldwell (
talk) 12:28, 28 March 2021 (UTC)reply
This has some stuff about a James Swoveland affirming to have ridden in Lambert's car in 1891, that might warrant mention.
@
JPxG: Thanks for hint (nice catch). I have that article in my article already eleven times as Ref #4.--
Doug Coldwell (
talk) 21:50, 26 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Sorry, this one kind of fell off the radar. I will go through it in a bit. jp×g 04:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Y: Great, no action required.
: Not necessary but might be worth looking at.
N: Needs to be fixed.
Copyvio
Y Earwig's detector says everything is fine.
Stability
Y Article is quite stable. Has not been the subject of any controversy except from an IP address repeatedly adding stuff like "where he learned how to fly" and "harold".
POV
Minor amounts of general fluff like "That was a good thing, since", not a big deal.
NThere were about 300 horseless carriages built up to 1895,[4] but Lambert was the first with a functional working automobile that he created in 1891 Huh?
YRef 7 isn't accessible for me but I will try to get a hold of it somewhere. It isn't very load-bearing, so I will AGF.
Y Ref 8 looks good.
Y Ref 9 looks good.
Y Ref 10 looks good.
Y Refs 11 - 18 look good.
N Ref 19 is "newspaper clip "Oldest Resident of Ohio City" "Death Claims 1st Passenger of gasoline auto"". No year, no publication, no author, no link... :(
Done Removed, as other inline references in the paragraph cover the first accident.--
Doug Coldwell (
talk) 12:00, 28 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Y Ref 20 looks good.
Y Ref 21 looks good.
Ref 22 could do with a link.
Y Ref 23 looks good.
Conclusion
I have been a little consumed by tasks today, so might have to get around to finishing this tomorrow. jp×g 04:49, 27 March 2021 (UTC)reply
User:JPxG All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--
Doug Coldwell (
talk) 12:28, 28 March 2021 (UTC)reply