There are quite a few uncited passages, including at least one full uncited paragraph. Also, sources such as CBDB and GCD are not considered reliable sources, as their content is user-submitted. Those sources would be appropriate under "External links". Names of authors cited normally should be cited as last name, first name.
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Issues so far appear to be fixed; is the review done?
Wizardman 23:16, 22 November 2012 (UTC)reply
Ummm...no, actually. There are still uncited passages, and all of the cited authors are still listed first name, last name. CüRlyTüRkeyTalkContribs 23:40, 22 November 2012 (UTC)reply
In that case it should be failed, the writer's had a month to tackle it.
Wizardman 01:09, 23 November 2012 (UTC)reply
There are quite a few uncited passages, including at least one full uncited paragraph. Also, sources such as CBDB and GCD are not considered reliable sources, as their content is user-submitted. Those sources would be appropriate under "External links". Names of authors cited normally should be cited as last name, first name.
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Issues so far appear to be fixed; is the review done?
Wizardman 23:16, 22 November 2012 (UTC)reply
Ummm...no, actually. There are still uncited passages, and all of the cited authors are still listed first name, last name. CüRlyTüRkeyTalkContribs 23:40, 22 November 2012 (UTC)reply
In that case it should be failed, the writer's had a month to tackle it.
Wizardman 01:09, 23 November 2012 (UTC)reply