Only a couple of minor concerns: the Byzantine terms without their own articles should be explained in the text (even just the word in parentheses). Also, the lead seems a little short to me, but I don't have any specific suggestions as far as expanding it. Nice work, Constantine.
Parsecboy (
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12:49, 17 July 2010 (UTC)reply
I think I've linked every Byzantine term I used in the article, or at least I can't find any unlinked ones. For the lead, I'll try to expand it. Thanks for the review! Cheers,
Constantine ✍ 14:08, 17 July 2010 (UTC)reply
Yeah, I think it's fine actually. The one I saw that prompted that comment was sebastokratores in the last section, but I forgot it was linked earlier in the page.
Parsecboy (
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14:54, 17 July 2010 (UTC)reply
Only a couple of minor concerns: the Byzantine terms without their own articles should be explained in the text (even just the word in parentheses). Also, the lead seems a little short to me, but I don't have any specific suggestions as far as expanding it. Nice work, Constantine.
Parsecboy (
talk)
12:49, 17 July 2010 (UTC)reply
I think I've linked every Byzantine term I used in the article, or at least I can't find any unlinked ones. For the lead, I'll try to expand it. Thanks for the review! Cheers,
Constantine ✍ 14:08, 17 July 2010 (UTC)reply
Yeah, I think it's fine actually. The one I saw that prompted that comment was sebastokratores in the last section, but I forgot it was linked earlier in the page.
Parsecboy (
talk)
14:54, 17 July 2010 (UTC)reply