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This article should not be speedy deleted as lacking sufficient context to identify its subject, because... (your reason here) -- Sandra paech ( talk) 08:19, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
I have only started it and intend to do a lot more with the entry over time because I am an older person who requires time.
He was the composer of cornish christmas carols in Australia after his arrival in 1885 and is remembered as a gifted composer and conductor in the so called Little Cornwall of Australia, i.e. The Cornish triangle of Moonta, Kadina and Wallaroo. His carols are sung every year at or near Christmas time chiefly in Carols by Candlelight in South Australian towns. I have reliable sources as references.
Thankyou for your consideration.
Sandra Paech
Hi! I've made some of the citations in-line cites. When citing material on Wikipedia, you need to have the citation on the end of the sentence (ideally) or the claim. The site doesn't do cites like you would see in written, print papers like "(8)" - it has to be akin to what I've done in the article.
The article also needs editing for tone and grammar, as there are a few dropped commas and periods in the article. I also note that at one point you mention someone by their last name only. When mentioning someone in an article, you need to give the person's full name and if they have an article, link to that. However you should only really name someone if you're going to be quoting them, as otherwise you only have to write out the claim and put their citation at the sentence's end. Now if this is a claim or opinion held only by one or two people, then mentioning a name would be good. However if it's a known publication then you only have to write out the sentence thusly:
This gets the same point across, but in fewer words. Brevity is something to keep in mind when editing. While of course you don't want to make it 10 sentences long, if you can write the same information in fewer words, the better. Also, make sure that you're careful about tone. I get the impression that you're likely a student (if so, we do have a program set up for students and their teachers) and something to keep in mind is that encyclopedia articles is a bit different than a student or academic paper. Tokyogirl79 (。◕‿◕。) 04:04, 16 February 2016 (UTC)
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This article should not be speedy deleted as lacking sufficient context to identify its subject, because... (your reason here) -- Sandra paech ( talk) 08:19, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
I have only started it and intend to do a lot more with the entry over time because I am an older person who requires time.
He was the composer of cornish christmas carols in Australia after his arrival in 1885 and is remembered as a gifted composer and conductor in the so called Little Cornwall of Australia, i.e. The Cornish triangle of Moonta, Kadina and Wallaroo. His carols are sung every year at or near Christmas time chiefly in Carols by Candlelight in South Australian towns. I have reliable sources as references.
Thankyou for your consideration.
Sandra Paech
Hi! I've made some of the citations in-line cites. When citing material on Wikipedia, you need to have the citation on the end of the sentence (ideally) or the claim. The site doesn't do cites like you would see in written, print papers like "(8)" - it has to be akin to what I've done in the article.
The article also needs editing for tone and grammar, as there are a few dropped commas and periods in the article. I also note that at one point you mention someone by their last name only. When mentioning someone in an article, you need to give the person's full name and if they have an article, link to that. However you should only really name someone if you're going to be quoting them, as otherwise you only have to write out the claim and put their citation at the sentence's end. Now if this is a claim or opinion held only by one or two people, then mentioning a name would be good. However if it's a known publication then you only have to write out the sentence thusly:
This gets the same point across, but in fewer words. Brevity is something to keep in mind when editing. While of course you don't want to make it 10 sentences long, if you can write the same information in fewer words, the better. Also, make sure that you're careful about tone. I get the impression that you're likely a student (if so, we do have a program set up for students and their teachers) and something to keep in mind is that encyclopedia articles is a bit different than a student or academic paper. Tokyogirl79 (。◕‿◕。) 04:04, 16 February 2016 (UTC)