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Reviewer: – MuZemike 01:56, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
In progress - I still need to go through the references in (the ones which I can readily access) to double-check and verify the material with the sources, but the prose isn't too bad, but there are some corrections that need to be made above. There is also the neutrality issue above.
A couple of suggestions is to double-check your comma usage next time (as some were in places that shouldn't have that I corrected). Also, try to find a picture of Haynes; I know a picture of him is located here, but it's not PD, as it was painted in 1934. Perhaps there is something else out there? (Note: I won't fail the nomination if none is found, as having a picture is not required; I'm just surprised there is not a free picture of him out there.) – MuZemike 01:56, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
Passed – First off, sorry for the delay in the review, as I was busy IRL the past couple of days, which didn't give me time to sit down and go over in more detail. Everything that I could readily verify looks good, so there aren't any verifiability issues present. All the issues above look good, now; I took care of the punctuation in the citations myself. The reason I request that was due to consistency with the rest of the citations and the fact that most manuals of style out there normally require them (i.e. why would be expect to be any different?). Anyways, it's a minor enough of an issue in that I wouldn't lose much sleep over anyways if you still disagree, and I don't think that should readily get in the way of the GA standards. Anyways nice work on the article; it's good to see someone put some good research into a relatively unknown figure in America's early history. –
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06:22, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: – MuZemike 01:56, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
In progress - I still need to go through the references in (the ones which I can readily access) to double-check and verify the material with the sources, but the prose isn't too bad, but there are some corrections that need to be made above. There is also the neutrality issue above.
A couple of suggestions is to double-check your comma usage next time (as some were in places that shouldn't have that I corrected). Also, try to find a picture of Haynes; I know a picture of him is located here, but it's not PD, as it was painted in 1934. Perhaps there is something else out there? (Note: I won't fail the nomination if none is found, as having a picture is not required; I'm just surprised there is not a free picture of him out there.) – MuZemike 01:56, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
Passed – First off, sorry for the delay in the review, as I was busy IRL the past couple of days, which didn't give me time to sit down and go over in more detail. Everything that I could readily verify looks good, so there aren't any verifiability issues present. All the issues above look good, now; I took care of the punctuation in the citations myself. The reason I request that was due to consistency with the rest of the citations and the fact that most manuals of style out there normally require them (i.e. why would be expect to be any different?). Anyways, it's a minor enough of an issue in that I wouldn't lose much sleep over anyways if you still disagree, and I don't think that should readily get in the way of the GA standards. Anyways nice work on the article; it's good to see someone put some good research into a relatively unknown figure in America's early history. –
MuZemike
06:22, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
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