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Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian ( talk · contribs) 12:04, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be conducting this review using the table below. I've had a read of the article and looked at some of the sources. Before I dive into a full review, I just want to warn that I think this article still needs a lot of work. There are quite a few uncited claims which I believe fall out of the remit of
GA criteria 2b. I also have some queries about the reliability of certain sources, as there appears to be a lot of self-published/blog material (not necessarily bad per se, but given the significance of Jingle Bells I anticipate there will be more reliable and reputable alternatives).
I have a question about the chart section as I'm not very familiar with how they are used for covers for songs: How do you determine which artists are included in the section? Is it every artist which has ever charted with a cover of Jingle Bells? If not, how did you decide who to include in the section? And should "mashups" really also be included (e.g. Jingle Bells/Hokey Cokey and Jingle Bells/U Can't Touch This)? If you have any insight please let me know :) Unexpectedlydian♯4 talk‽ 12:04, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose) There are quite a few statements in the article which I believe could be reasonably challenged, which do not have citations: Lead
History
Lyrics
Melody
There are other examples in the article of where citations are needed, but the missing references mentioned above are the most crucial to be addressed in my opinion. Reliable sources are cited inline I have some queries about the reliability and relevance of certain sources:
I haven't conducted a source spot-check yet.
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
History
Melody
Parodies and homages
Charts
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
History
Melody
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian ( talk · contribs) 12:04, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be conducting this review using the table below. I've had a read of the article and looked at some of the sources. Before I dive into a full review, I just want to warn that I think this article still needs a lot of work. There are quite a few uncited claims which I believe fall out of the remit of
GA criteria 2b. I also have some queries about the reliability of certain sources, as there appears to be a lot of self-published/blog material (not necessarily bad per se, but given the significance of Jingle Bells I anticipate there will be more reliable and reputable alternatives).
I have a question about the chart section as I'm not very familiar with how they are used for covers for songs: How do you determine which artists are included in the section? Is it every artist which has ever charted with a cover of Jingle Bells? If not, how did you decide who to include in the section? And should "mashups" really also be included (e.g. Jingle Bells/Hokey Cokey and Jingle Bells/U Can't Touch This)? If you have any insight please let me know :) Unexpectedlydian♯4 talk‽ 12:04, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose) There are quite a few statements in the article which I believe could be reasonably challenged, which do not have citations: Lead
History
Lyrics
Melody
There are other examples in the article of where citations are needed, but the missing references mentioned above are the most crucial to be addressed in my opinion. Reliable sources are cited inline I have some queries about the reliability and relevance of certain sources:
I haven't conducted a source spot-check yet.
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
History
Melody
Parodies and homages
Charts
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
History
Melody
Parodies and homages
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. |