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Reviewer: Homeostasis07 ( talk · contribs) 01:39, 10 January 2020 (UTC)
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I've rephrased a few things in the lead, but there are a couple of things I've not been able to rewrite myself. Could you elaborate on the below, because they don't mean all that much as they're currently written. The rest of the article should be fine. Homeostasis07 ( talk/ contributions) 02:06, 11 January 2020 (UTC)
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His constant fights with his family members would eventually lead him to become an antihero, as crafted by Bandai Namco's director Katsuhiro Harada but in a different way form from Kazuya and Heihachi. Nevertheless, Jin was portrayed as the main character from multiple adaptations due to the staff members finding him as a more suitable main character.
He is a particularly memorable character for the fighting game genre because of the impact he had on the storyline and the way his gameplay was altered to reflect the franchise's narrative. His dark characterization and devil persona were also noted while Devil Jin remained popular for retaining Jin's classic fighting style which he discarded.
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I've rephrased a few things in the lead, but there are a couple of things I've not been able to rewrite myself. Could you elaborate on the below, because they don't mean all that much as they're currently written. The rest of the article should be fine. Homeostasis07 ( talk/ contributions) 02:06, 11 January 2020 (UTC)
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His constant fights with his family members would eventually lead him to become an antihero, as crafted by Bandai Namco's director Katsuhiro Harada but in a different way form from Kazuya and Heihachi. Nevertheless, Jin was portrayed as the main character from multiple adaptations due to the staff members finding him as a more suitable main character.
He is a particularly memorable character for the fighting game genre because of the impact he had on the storyline and the way his gameplay was altered to reflect the franchise's narrative. His dark characterization and devil persona were also noted while Devil Jin remained popular for retaining Jin's classic fighting style which he discarded.
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