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There is a move discussion in progress on Talk:History of the Jews in Abkhazia which affects this page. Please participate on that page and not in this talk page section. Thank you. — RMCD bot 05:07, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
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5x expanded by Golden ( talk). Self-nominated at 15:35, 26 January 2022 (UTC).
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Overall: A lovely piece of work - a narrative but source-/academically-backed summary of an interesting history. Just a few things to do. First, if you can confirm that this is just your second nomination (I see only one past success, but in case of far-back, or failed, noms, just to be sure). Second, there must be a citation for the hook fact. The refs are offline, so I can't say, but maybe one or more of the refs for the second sentence here also apply to the first sentence (The two communities did not even pray together and buried the dead in different parts of the Jewish cemetery. Ashkenazim were forced to settle in poor neighbourhoods and boarding houses, work in bars and clubs with a dubious reputation and some women worked in prostitution.[8][9])? Finally, the big one. A massive job has been done, but it does not seems to be 5 times expansion of the base text, but 4.x, and we do have to be strict on this, to be fair to all. So can you either demonstrate that the DYKCHeck tool is mistaken, and the expansion is 5x, or add a few more relevant sentences? Many thanks, and I look forward to being able to turn the couple of reds above green and approve this soon. Golden - can you come back on this? SeoR ( talk) 12:43, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk · contribs) 21:10, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
I will attempt to review this. I will use
this existing
good article as something of a reference. Not to discourage you, but I think your article focuses a little too much on their modern status, and contains relatively little actual history. It may be best to split it into separate articles. I would hate to quickfail it, but it will need a lot of work. As soon as I can, I will try to have a list of specific recommendations. --
An anonymous username, not my real name (
talk)
21:10, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
Hmmm, after reading it over some more I'm afraid it doesn't give broad enough coverage; again, it focuses largely on modern Jewish Hong Kongers. I am requesting a second opinion, but I'm leaning towards quickfailing it. -- An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk) 23:42, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: moved. ( closed by non-admin page mover) Jack Frost ( talk) 11:09, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
History of the Jews in Hong Kong → Jews in Hong Kong – The article covers much more than just the history of the community, including their current situation, cuisine, schools and more. — Golden call me maybe? 10:33, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
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Would this article benefit from including Template:Jews and Judaism sidebar? Some similar articles about Jewish communities in particular locations have the template ( History of the Jews in China, American Jews, History of the Jews in Alexandria) and some don't ( History of the Jews in New York City, History of the Jews in Moscow). MadameOctavian ( talk) 06:24, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
Just a heads up that I'll be copyediting this article in response to the request to the Guild of Copy Editors, if anyone has questions/comments. MadameOctavian ( talk) 12:05, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
The article is currently organised with the main headings 'History' (including 19th-20th century) and then 'Current Situation'. The name of 'Current situation' is problematic because it dates the article. My suggestions are that
Wanted to get consensus before making a big structural change like that :) MadameOctavian ( talk) 07:08, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: moved. Technically a request to undo an undiscussed move. – robertsky ( talk) 02:14, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
History of the Jews in Hong Kong → Jews in Hong Kong – Per Talk:History_of_the_Jews_in_Hong_Kong#Requested_move_19_February_2022, this BOLD move by @ Omnis Scientia should be reverted. Zanahary ( talk) 20:40, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Jews in Hong Kong ( final version) received a peer review by Wikipedia editors, which on 16 August 2022 was archived. It may contain ideas you can use to improve this article. |
Jews in Hong Kong is a former featured article candidate. Please view the links under Article milestones below to see why the nomination failed. For older candidates, please check the archive. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
Jews in Hong Kong has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
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This article has previously been nominated to be moved.
Discussions:
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There is a move discussion in progress on Talk:History of the Jews in Abkhazia which affects this page. Please participate on that page and not in this talk page section. Thank you. — RMCD bot 05:07, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk)
23:39, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
5x expanded by Golden ( talk). Self-nominated at 15:35, 26 January 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: None required. |
Overall: A lovely piece of work - a narrative but source-/academically-backed summary of an interesting history. Just a few things to do. First, if you can confirm that this is just your second nomination (I see only one past success, but in case of far-back, or failed, noms, just to be sure). Second, there must be a citation for the hook fact. The refs are offline, so I can't say, but maybe one or more of the refs for the second sentence here also apply to the first sentence (The two communities did not even pray together and buried the dead in different parts of the Jewish cemetery. Ashkenazim were forced to settle in poor neighbourhoods and boarding houses, work in bars and clubs with a dubious reputation and some women worked in prostitution.[8][9])? Finally, the big one. A massive job has been done, but it does not seems to be 5 times expansion of the base text, but 4.x, and we do have to be strict on this, to be fair to all. So can you either demonstrate that the DYKCHeck tool is mistaken, and the expansion is 5x, or add a few more relevant sentences? Many thanks, and I look forward to being able to turn the couple of reds above green and approve this soon. Golden - can you come back on this? SeoR ( talk) 12:43, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk · contribs) 21:10, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
I will attempt to review this. I will use
this existing
good article as something of a reference. Not to discourage you, but I think your article focuses a little too much on their modern status, and contains relatively little actual history. It may be best to split it into separate articles. I would hate to quickfail it, but it will need a lot of work. As soon as I can, I will try to have a list of specific recommendations. --
An anonymous username, not my real name (
talk)
21:10, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
Hmmm, after reading it over some more I'm afraid it doesn't give broad enough coverage; again, it focuses largely on modern Jewish Hong Kongers. I am requesting a second opinion, but I'm leaning towards quickfailing it. -- An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk) 23:42, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: moved. ( closed by non-admin page mover) Jack Frost ( talk) 11:09, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
History of the Jews in Hong Kong → Jews in Hong Kong – The article covers much more than just the history of the community, including their current situation, cuisine, schools and more. — Golden call me maybe? 10:33, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
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Would this article benefit from including Template:Jews and Judaism sidebar? Some similar articles about Jewish communities in particular locations have the template ( History of the Jews in China, American Jews, History of the Jews in Alexandria) and some don't ( History of the Jews in New York City, History of the Jews in Moscow). MadameOctavian ( talk) 06:24, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
Just a heads up that I'll be copyediting this article in response to the request to the Guild of Copy Editors, if anyone has questions/comments. MadameOctavian ( talk) 12:05, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
The article is currently organised with the main headings 'History' (including 19th-20th century) and then 'Current Situation'. The name of 'Current situation' is problematic because it dates the article. My suggestions are that
Wanted to get consensus before making a big structural change like that :) MadameOctavian ( talk) 07:08, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: moved. Technically a request to undo an undiscussed move. – robertsky ( talk) 02:14, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
History of the Jews in Hong Kong → Jews in Hong Kong – Per Talk:History_of_the_Jews_in_Hong_Kong#Requested_move_19_February_2022, this BOLD move by @ Omnis Scientia should be reverted. Zanahary ( talk) 20:40, 31 May 2024 (UTC)