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She is from Madison Heights Va And her birh day is Feb 21 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.152.32.251 ( talk) 23:21, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
The Jessica Martin this page is about is not the same Jessica Martin who voiced Samus Aran in Metroid: Other M. That would be this woman. http://www.imdb.com/name/nm3951823/
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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 19:41, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this review on. It's been waiting in the queue a bit too long given how short it is.
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Martin became an impressionist on the fringe circuit.– When and where?
She auditioned for several roles– What type of roles? Was she focused exclusively on impressionist roles by this point? And were they all television roles, or was she applying for stage roles too?
Bremner and Martin toured theatres together in 1987, with a show of impressions.– Does the source say where? Were they limited to London, for example, or did they travel farther?
Lottie Ames in Mack and Mabel, and Lottie Lacey in the revival of William Inge's The Dark at the Top of the Stairs.– Are there years for these?
Her first job, in 1983 when she was 21, was as a resident singer at St James's Hotel and Club, where her father, Placido Martin, was the cocktail pianist.– Should be rewritten, maybe split into two sentences.
She told an interviewer in 2019– This feels tacked on. I expected the statement to be something about her career. Lead into the sentence so we know it's about her father.
whose career has diversified to include comic writing and illustrating– Would it be fair to simply call her a comic writer or an illustrator at this point? If not, then it probably shouldn’t be in the first sentence.
Many thanks for a helpful and constructive review, Thebiguglyalien. Unfortunately there's not enough detail in indpendent reliable sources (that I could find) to fully address all of your comments. I've replied to your points above - let me know what else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 14:33, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Bruxton (
talk)
00:07, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by BennyOnTheLoose ( talk). Self-nominated at 16:29, 3 January 2023 (UTC).
Jessica Martin has been listed as one of the
Media and drama good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: January 3, 2023. ( Reviewed version). |
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A fact from Jessica Martin appeared on Wikipedia's
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She is from Madison Heights Va And her birh day is Feb 21 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.152.32.251 ( talk) 23:21, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
The Jessica Martin this page is about is not the same Jessica Martin who voiced Samus Aran in Metroid: Other M. That would be this woman. http://www.imdb.com/name/nm3951823/
The following Wikimedia Commons file used on this page or its Wikidata item has been nominated for deletion:
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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 19:41, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this review on. It's been waiting in the queue a bit too long given how short it is.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk)
19:41, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Martin became an impressionist on the fringe circuit.– When and where?
She auditioned for several roles– What type of roles? Was she focused exclusively on impressionist roles by this point? And were they all television roles, or was she applying for stage roles too?
Bremner and Martin toured theatres together in 1987, with a show of impressions.– Does the source say where? Were they limited to London, for example, or did they travel farther?
Lottie Ames in Mack and Mabel, and Lottie Lacey in the revival of William Inge's The Dark at the Top of the Stairs.– Are there years for these?
Her first job, in 1983 when she was 21, was as a resident singer at St James's Hotel and Club, where her father, Placido Martin, was the cocktail pianist.– Should be rewritten, maybe split into two sentences.
She told an interviewer in 2019– This feels tacked on. I expected the statement to be something about her career. Lead into the sentence so we know it's about her father.
whose career has diversified to include comic writing and illustrating– Would it be fair to simply call her a comic writer or an illustrator at this point? If not, then it probably shouldn’t be in the first sentence.
Many thanks for a helpful and constructive review, Thebiguglyalien. Unfortunately there's not enough detail in indpendent reliable sources (that I could find) to fully address all of your comments. I've replied to your points above - let me know what else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 14:33, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Bruxton (
talk)
00:07, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by BennyOnTheLoose ( talk). Self-nominated at 16:29, 3 January 2023 (UTC).