"In 1980, Blancornelas and co-founded the weekly magazine Zeta." - and who?
"Their courageous example in the face of adversity – and the murder of 48 journalists – is said to be inspirational.[33]" - the underlined is
weasily. Suggest rewording. --
Tomcat(
7)20:40, 18 October 2012 (UTC)reply
I believe I've fixed these. In both instances, the sentences appeared to me simply extraneous: one an accidental redundancy, the second an expendable mention of Blancornelas's inspirational qualities. If ComputerJA disagrees, though, I'm fine with some form of them going back in.
Khazar2 (
talk)
22:03, 18 October 2012 (UTC)reply
"In 1980, Blancornelas and co-founded the weekly magazine Zeta." - and who?
"Their courageous example in the face of adversity – and the murder of 48 journalists – is said to be inspirational.[33]" - the underlined is
weasily. Suggest rewording. --
Tomcat(
7)20:40, 18 October 2012 (UTC)reply
I believe I've fixed these. In both instances, the sentences appeared to me simply extraneous: one an accidental redundancy, the second an expendable mention of Blancornelas's inspirational qualities. If ComputerJA disagrees, though, I'm fine with some form of them going back in.
Khazar2 (
talk)
22:03, 18 October 2012 (UTC)reply