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Davidbaumel.nj. Thank you for the reply on your talk page that you are not paid for these edits. However your changes continue to slant the entry and are becoming disruptive.
Most recently you removed all of the wikilinks and added unnecessary citations in lead (unless very controversial, the lead should not need references because it should summarize all the referenced material in the body of the entry—I realize as a new editor you may not know this), apparently in the interest of pushing the current candidacy to the first sentence, which comes across as using the encyclopedia to promote a candidate. This is not good for Wikipedia or the person in question. I realize it may not be intentional but even the appearance of failing to uphold the project’s
neutrality is a problem. I strongly suggest you start by working on a different, less sensitive entry to practice editing on since there have been repeated problems here. If you have any specific questions I am happy to answer them to the best of my ability.
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Jennifer McClellan article. This is
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Hi
Davidbaumel.nj. Thank you for the reply on your talk page that you are not paid for these edits. However your changes continue to slant the entry and are becoming disruptive.
Most recently you removed all of the wikilinks and added unnecessary citations in lead (unless very controversial, the lead should not need references because it should summarize all the referenced material in the body of the entry—I realize as a new editor you may not know this), apparently in the interest of pushing the current candidacy to the first sentence, which comes across as using the encyclopedia to promote a candidate. This is not good for Wikipedia or the person in question. I realize it may not be intentional but even the appearance of failing to uphold the project’s
neutrality is a problem. I strongly suggest you start by working on a different, less sensitive entry to practice editing on since there have been repeated problems here. If you have any specific questions I am happy to answer them to the best of my ability.
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