A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Initial comments
"Lawrence is known in the media for being a vocal advocate of feminism and gender equality" - might be beneficial to link
Feminism here (or
Feminism in the United States, or even another one of the articles related to it)
"She is the youngest woman to accrue four Academy Award nominations" - the lead says she is the youngest woman, whereas the "2014–present: Established actress" section states she is the youngest person
"She then appeared in The Beaver, a black comedy directed by Jodie Foster" - was this film released in 2011?
"The Devil You Know, a small-scale feature that Lawrence had filmed for back in 2005 was her first release of 2013" - feature film?
"In 2013, Time magazine named her one of the most 100 influential people in the world" - Time is already linked before, so de-link it here
" In 2015. Lawrence was named "Entertainer of the Year" by Entertainment Weekly—a title she won also in 2012" - a title she also won in 2012
"She has also won a BAFTA Award for..." - BAFTA is always used without the "award" after it
Is AskMen a reliable source? I wouldn't know because I don't review film articles as much as I used to!
There was a discussion about it on the article's talk. I added that it just has an opinion about how sexy certain women are so I think it is fine. I also had no problem about it in my other FAs, so..
I done a full review of this but couldn't find many issues to raise. The article is well written, comprehensive, and all of the sources check out. I found a couple of dead links, but other than that there were no issues with venerability. Excellent work! I'll leave this on hold until all of the above are clarified. JAGUAR19:06, 6 December 2016 (UTC)reply
Thank you both! By all means, let's promote this. It well and truly meets the criteria, as evidenced by my short and lacklustre review LOL. I also want to congratulate you on the work, definitely FA material. JAGUAR23:02, 6 December 2016 (UTC)reply
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Initial comments
"Lawrence is known in the media for being a vocal advocate of feminism and gender equality" - might be beneficial to link
Feminism here (or
Feminism in the United States, or even another one of the articles related to it)
"She is the youngest woman to accrue four Academy Award nominations" - the lead says she is the youngest woman, whereas the "2014–present: Established actress" section states she is the youngest person
"She then appeared in The Beaver, a black comedy directed by Jodie Foster" - was this film released in 2011?
"The Devil You Know, a small-scale feature that Lawrence had filmed for back in 2005 was her first release of 2013" - feature film?
"In 2013, Time magazine named her one of the most 100 influential people in the world" - Time is already linked before, so de-link it here
" In 2015. Lawrence was named "Entertainer of the Year" by Entertainment Weekly—a title she won also in 2012" - a title she also won in 2012
"She has also won a BAFTA Award for..." - BAFTA is always used without the "award" after it
Is AskMen a reliable source? I wouldn't know because I don't review film articles as much as I used to!
There was a discussion about it on the article's talk. I added that it just has an opinion about how sexy certain women are so I think it is fine. I also had no problem about it in my other FAs, so..
I done a full review of this but couldn't find many issues to raise. The article is well written, comprehensive, and all of the sources check out. I found a couple of dead links, but other than that there were no issues with venerability. Excellent work! I'll leave this on hold until all of the above are clarified. JAGUAR19:06, 6 December 2016 (UTC)reply
Thank you both! By all means, let's promote this. It well and truly meets the criteria, as evidenced by my short and lacklustre review LOL. I also want to congratulate you on the work, definitely FA material. JAGUAR23:02, 6 December 2016 (UTC)reply