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Okay, off the bat, I see that the lead section is way too short, only being two short paragraphs. Try and get it to be at least three paragraphs (but not more than four). — Obento Musubi - Contributions 17:39, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
There must be a lot more clarification about the terminology, as it is not clarified in the article. Phrases like "The Charleston", "syncopation" and "non-syncopation" are not explained in this article. Although "syncopation" is wikilinked, it should be defined in the article itself. I am confused as to what a "clave" is, and you should provide specific examples. From the definition given, I believe " Take Five" is an example of a clave, as it goes "1-2-3 1-2". "Clave" should be given a separate section, as it seems to be a very important part of jazz drumming. An infobox would be very nice, but if you can't find one, you can either make one or leave it as it is. The sound preview is a very good addition to the article. I feel that this article is not yet ready for good article status. Perhaps you should hold peer reviews for this article. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 17:59, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
Also, this article has a lot of jargon. See WP:Explain jargon for details. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 06:25, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
I'm finding titles that are worded all lowercase. Please fix this. Remember that words like "in", "of", "and", "the", and "for" are not capitalized. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 05:50, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
As much as I wish I could pass this article, this is simply not ready for being a good article. I believe that the citations are improperly capitalized, there is a lot of jargon, and a bit disorganized as to the way it was written. I hope that when you nominate it in the future, it is of a better quality. Please do not take this as a personal attack. Please instead use this as a way to improve the article. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 18:04, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
Also, try and find more images to put in the beginning of the article. It would make the article's quality much better. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 18:07, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
I wanted to look at it again, and I must congratulate you for making so many edits to Jazz drumming, Kakofonous. It looks much better now. I'd be ecstatic to see where it would be in a month! — Obento Musubi - Contributions 00:55, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
Well, well, well, one tries to do a good turn, and one's hand gets bitten. As this article failed its GAN very quickly, and very recently, I thought I was trying to help. That's the last you'll see of me. All you have to do is revert the article and you will be where you were, and then cross your fingers. Goodbye.-- andreasegde ( talk) 15:35, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
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It would be nice to describe the differences between these different drum styles. In the 1920-1930, the default was to do the ♩♫ rhythm on the hit-hat, and then it moved to the ride cymbal during the 1940-1950 in Jump Blues and then Bebop and Hard Bop. Also, I think that they used to play the bass drum on 1 and 3 only, and now it's also on the beats 2 and 4. AlexandreQuessy ( talk) 15:33, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
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Okay, off the bat, I see that the lead section is way too short, only being two short paragraphs. Try and get it to be at least three paragraphs (but not more than four). — Obento Musubi - Contributions 17:39, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
There must be a lot more clarification about the terminology, as it is not clarified in the article. Phrases like "The Charleston", "syncopation" and "non-syncopation" are not explained in this article. Although "syncopation" is wikilinked, it should be defined in the article itself. I am confused as to what a "clave" is, and you should provide specific examples. From the definition given, I believe " Take Five" is an example of a clave, as it goes "1-2-3 1-2". "Clave" should be given a separate section, as it seems to be a very important part of jazz drumming. An infobox would be very nice, but if you can't find one, you can either make one or leave it as it is. The sound preview is a very good addition to the article. I feel that this article is not yet ready for good article status. Perhaps you should hold peer reviews for this article. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 17:59, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
Also, this article has a lot of jargon. See WP:Explain jargon for details. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 06:25, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
I'm finding titles that are worded all lowercase. Please fix this. Remember that words like "in", "of", "and", "the", and "for" are not capitalized. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 05:50, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
As much as I wish I could pass this article, this is simply not ready for being a good article. I believe that the citations are improperly capitalized, there is a lot of jargon, and a bit disorganized as to the way it was written. I hope that when you nominate it in the future, it is of a better quality. Please do not take this as a personal attack. Please instead use this as a way to improve the article. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 18:04, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
Also, try and find more images to put in the beginning of the article. It would make the article's quality much better. — Obento Musubi - Contributions 18:07, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
I wanted to look at it again, and I must congratulate you for making so many edits to Jazz drumming, Kakofonous. It looks much better now. I'd be ecstatic to see where it would be in a month! — Obento Musubi - Contributions 00:55, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
Well, well, well, one tries to do a good turn, and one's hand gets bitten. As this article failed its GAN very quickly, and very recently, I thought I was trying to help. That's the last you'll see of me. All you have to do is revert the article and you will be where you were, and then cross your fingers. Goodbye.-- andreasegde ( talk) 15:35, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
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It would be nice to describe the differences between these different drum styles. In the 1920-1930, the default was to do the ♩♫ rhythm on the hit-hat, and then it moved to the ride cymbal during the 1940-1950 in Jump Blues and then Bebop and Hard Bop. Also, I think that they used to play the bass drum on 1 and 3 only, and now it's also on the beats 2 and 4. AlexandreQuessy ( talk) 15:33, 9 February 2018 (UTC)