Perhaps you could expand the lead further to include the achievements Civetti has achieved as coach of the Tufts
Pre-tufts career
"Civetti is a native of Wellesley, Massachusetts and attended Belmont Hill School in Belmont, Massachusetts"
"Having being recruited by legendary Division III football coach Don Miller" = legendary is POV per
MOS:PUFF
"After graduating from Trinity in 2001 with an English degree" - reword this sentence so it reads as follows After graduating from Trinity with an
English degree in 2001,
"and earned a Master's degree in education" - remove the capital letter from "Master's degree"
"While at Boston College, Civetti helped coach a future NFL Most Valuable Player, quarterback Matt Ryan." - While at Boston College, Civetti helped coach quarterback
Matt Ryan, a future
NFL Most Valuable Player.
Tufts career
"In 2009 – after Tufts' season had already ended –" - In 2009 – after the conclusion of the Tufts' season –
"to snap its 31-game losing stream" - to break its 31-game losing streak
"The Jumbos also beat the Middlebury Panthers," - defeated
"On October 29, 2016, Tufts beat the Amherst Purple and White, 27–10, for the first time since 2007." - try On October 29, 2017, Tufts beat the Amherst Purple and White team for the first time since 2007 in a 27–10 victory.
"In 2016, Civetti coached the Jumbos to a 7–1 record and second-place finish in the NESCAC," - That year, Civetti coached the Jumbos to a second-place finish in the NESCAC with a 7–1 record,
"Four other players were also named to the All-NESCAC first team including senior" _ add a comma between the words "including" and "senior"
References
Be consistent in how you present the publication and access dates as you cannot have dates like 2017-05-05 28 November 2009 used sparingly
ESPN, Bleacher Report, FanBuzz, Tufts University Athletics & NESCAC should be in the publication field and not the work nor website field
Perhaps you could expand the lead further to include the achievements Civetti has achieved as coach of the Tufts
Pre-tufts career
"Civetti is a native of Wellesley, Massachusetts and attended Belmont Hill School in Belmont, Massachusetts"
"Having being recruited by legendary Division III football coach Don Miller" = legendary is POV per
MOS:PUFF
"After graduating from Trinity in 2001 with an English degree" - reword this sentence so it reads as follows After graduating from Trinity with an
English degree in 2001,
"and earned a Master's degree in education" - remove the capital letter from "Master's degree"
"While at Boston College, Civetti helped coach a future NFL Most Valuable Player, quarterback Matt Ryan." - While at Boston College, Civetti helped coach quarterback
Matt Ryan, a future
NFL Most Valuable Player.
Tufts career
"In 2009 – after Tufts' season had already ended –" - In 2009 – after the conclusion of the Tufts' season –
"to snap its 31-game losing stream" - to break its 31-game losing streak
"The Jumbos also beat the Middlebury Panthers," - defeated
"On October 29, 2016, Tufts beat the Amherst Purple and White, 27–10, for the first time since 2007." - try On October 29, 2017, Tufts beat the Amherst Purple and White team for the first time since 2007 in a 27–10 victory.
"In 2016, Civetti coached the Jumbos to a 7–1 record and second-place finish in the NESCAC," - That year, Civetti coached the Jumbos to a second-place finish in the NESCAC with a 7–1 record,
"Four other players were also named to the All-NESCAC first team including senior" _ add a comma between the words "including" and "senior"
References
Be consistent in how you present the publication and access dates as you cannot have dates like 2017-05-05 28 November 2009 used sparingly
ESPN, Bleacher Report, FanBuzz, Tufts University Athletics & NESCAC should be in the publication field and not the work nor website field