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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:23, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
I'll review this tomorrow; sorry for the delay so far. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:23, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Alright. Overall, the article's good despite the length issues. I don't agree with the "too much bungie" concern, because it's kinda ironic to complain about his career taking up the article. It'd be like my baseball article failing because i talk primarily about the guy's baseball career. Anyway, here are any concerns I've found, along with suggestions for additions which looks like they could be feasible:
I'll put the article on hold for a few days and pass it when concerns are addressed/fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:24, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:23, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
I'll review this tomorrow; sorry for the delay so far. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:23, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Alright. Overall, the article's good despite the length issues. I don't agree with the "too much bungie" concern, because it's kinda ironic to complain about his career taking up the article. It'd be like my baseball article failing because i talk primarily about the guy's baseball career. Anyway, here are any concerns I've found, along with suggestions for additions which looks like they could be feasible:
I'll put the article on hold for a few days and pass it when concerns are addressed/fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:24, 20 April 2010 (UTC)