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Reviewer: Parsecboy ( talk · contribs) 16:30, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
You've got eagle eyes, my friend! Reworded everything, see how they work for you. Not sure what to add about the American Expeditionary Squadron as it seems to have been a temporary formation to protect shipping along the west coast of the Americas. I'm not sure of its exact name, nor when it was formed or disbanded, so I'm a little reluctant to add a link, and its activities discussed in the next couple of sentences. But if you think something more is needed, can you be a bit more specific? Thanks again for the thorough review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 17:35, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Parsecboy ( talk · contribs) 16:30, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
You've got eagle eyes, my friend! Reworded everything, see how they work for you. Not sure what to add about the American Expeditionary Squadron as it seems to have been a temporary formation to protect shipping along the west coast of the Americas. I'm not sure of its exact name, nor when it was formed or disbanded, so I'm a little reluctant to add a link, and its activities discussed in the next couple of sentences. But if you think something more is needed, can you be a bit more specific? Thanks again for the thorough review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 17:35, 6 May 2015 (UTC)