I would suggest not putting footnotes in the middle of sentences unless there is a punctuation mark. Things like "she found limited success in California[5] but did win a talent contest." look awkward and in that case, the footnote should probably be moved to the end of the sentence.
Done.
"During the decade, she would also collaborate on songs with Ray Charles and Larry Gatlin." - I would recommend including the names of these songs if possible.
Done.
Is there more to say about the First Word in Memory album?
Not much that I could find. I added that Bob Montgomery produced it. Not every album needs a full discussion I don't think.
I would recommend changing "Country LP's chart" and variants thereof to something like "Billboard country albums chart" or "Billboard Top Country Albums" for consistency.
Corrected that.
I changed a couple sub-headers to a more neutral tone.
Fair. The Columbia Records title did not really capture that section. That was when she had her biggest success as a recording artist, which is a fact. So I changed it to "commercial peak", which I think is more neutral.
The sources are well-chosen and I didn't see any that might be unreliable.
I nominated one image for deletion because its 1978 copyright date meant that it fell outside the "up to 1977 without a copyright notice". I swapped it out for a picture of Johnny Duncan given his relevance to her career. Per
MOS:ALT, I would recommend adding alt text to the images.
I would suggest not putting footnotes in the middle of sentences unless there is a punctuation mark. Things like "she found limited success in California[5] but did win a talent contest." look awkward and in that case, the footnote should probably be moved to the end of the sentence.
Done.
"During the decade, she would also collaborate on songs with Ray Charles and Larry Gatlin." - I would recommend including the names of these songs if possible.
Done.
Is there more to say about the First Word in Memory album?
Not much that I could find. I added that Bob Montgomery produced it. Not every album needs a full discussion I don't think.
I would recommend changing "Country LP's chart" and variants thereof to something like "Billboard country albums chart" or "Billboard Top Country Albums" for consistency.
Corrected that.
I changed a couple sub-headers to a more neutral tone.
Fair. The Columbia Records title did not really capture that section. That was when she had her biggest success as a recording artist, which is a fact. So I changed it to "commercial peak", which I think is more neutral.
The sources are well-chosen and I didn't see any that might be unreliable.
I nominated one image for deletion because its 1978 copyright date meant that it fell outside the "up to 1977 without a copyright notice". I swapped it out for a picture of Johnny Duncan given his relevance to her career. Per
MOS:ALT, I would recommend adding alt text to the images.