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I have made additional changes to keep the article from reading like an ad. For instance, I removed the bold name of the company/product line throughout the article and a claim that failed WP:NPOV in the first paragraph. Erechtheus 15:37, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
This article is horrible!!! It reads like a ad. I am going to try to rewrite it tonight when I get time. There are no claims to back anything up. And the use of flattering adjectives is biased. If I can't find any sources to back up some of the things mentioned in this article it is going to be a really short article,which would be better than how it is now. I mean the opening is ridiculous- "Many baby boomers remember the wildly popular JAMS shorts of the 1960s and 1980s." -- 72.154.193.191 ( talk) 22:50, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
I rewrote some of it, I think it makes it slightly less advertising sounding. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.223.125.74 ( talk) 20:08, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
Somebody has replaced the name of the founder of Jams (Rochlen) with two random chicas. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.35.164.250 ( talk) 02:50, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
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I have made additional changes to keep the article from reading like an ad. For instance, I removed the bold name of the company/product line throughout the article and a claim that failed WP:NPOV in the first paragraph. Erechtheus 15:37, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
This article is horrible!!! It reads like a ad. I am going to try to rewrite it tonight when I get time. There are no claims to back anything up. And the use of flattering adjectives is biased. If I can't find any sources to back up some of the things mentioned in this article it is going to be a really short article,which would be better than how it is now. I mean the opening is ridiculous- "Many baby boomers remember the wildly popular JAMS shorts of the 1960s and 1980s." -- 72.154.193.191 ( talk) 22:50, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
I rewrote some of it, I think it makes it slightly less advertising sounding. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.223.125.74 ( talk) 20:08, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
Somebody has replaced the name of the founder of Jams (Rochlen) with two random chicas. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.35.164.250 ( talk) 02:50, 24 July 2013 (UTC)