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Norman Dyrenfurth did not summit Everest in 1963. He was only the expedition leader. 63.142.207.34 ( talk) 06:49, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
This article looks like a C+ high school essay. The prose is childish, the tone is not impartial, and there's a flat contradiction regarding the deathdate between the introduction and the last sentence. Unless someone says otherwise, I intend to rework the whole thing. Rontrigger ( talk) 22:38, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
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Norman Dyrenfurth did not summit Everest in 1963. He was only the expedition leader. 63.142.207.34 ( talk) 06:49, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
This article looks like a C+ high school essay. The prose is childish, the tone is not impartial, and there's a flat contradiction regarding the deathdate between the introduction and the last sentence. Unless someone says otherwise, I intend to rework the whole thing. Rontrigger ( talk) 22:38, 27 August 2023 (UTC)