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The article needs to be expanded, at the moment it is a short article that doesn't draw the reader in. Sentences sound more like a list than a paragraph. I think it would be almost pushing to say this is a C-class article, it needs to be more 'readable'. Please peer review it before next assessment! JRA_
WestyQld2Talk00:35, 7 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Information doesn't flow. There are sections with one or two sentences. When career is expanded, it will need to have sub-sections. Much of the article sounds repetitive. Meredith went to Derby. He scored a goal. He played a game. He then got loaned. He then got traded.
I don't know why his personal life has an unreliable reference tag, but you may want to ask
this user why he added the tag. Personally I think it's fine and unless he has a reasonable explanation, the tag should be removed.
If the article is expanded, perhaps more photos would be nice?
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I have failed the article due to it being much like the
Alex Lawless nomination. It needs significant expansion before being considered for good article status.
Content to cover
Football in Australia. Who was he playing for in Melbourne? A quick google search hinted that he played in the Oceania Jnr Championships and therefore would be some type of junior representative for Australia
Early career Derby - Sligo is pretty light
Style of play should either be merged with the rest of the article or be at least a paragraph long.
The same with personal life. However, I believe more can be included. What about his family? Does he have another job? Does he have a weird obsession with toenails? Research.
References. Use a wider range. It will give you better information from several points of view.
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The article needs to be expanded, at the moment it is a short article that doesn't draw the reader in. Sentences sound more like a list than a paragraph. I think it would be almost pushing to say this is a C-class article, it needs to be more 'readable'. Please peer review it before next assessment! JRA_
WestyQld2Talk00:35, 7 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Information doesn't flow. There are sections with one or two sentences. When career is expanded, it will need to have sub-sections. Much of the article sounds repetitive. Meredith went to Derby. He scored a goal. He played a game. He then got loaned. He then got traded.
I don't know why his personal life has an unreliable reference tag, but you may want to ask
this user why he added the tag. Personally I think it's fine and unless he has a reasonable explanation, the tag should be removed.
If the article is expanded, perhaps more photos would be nice?
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
I have failed the article due to it being much like the
Alex Lawless nomination. It needs significant expansion before being considered for good article status.
Content to cover
Football in Australia. Who was he playing for in Melbourne? A quick google search hinted that he played in the Oceania Jnr Championships and therefore would be some type of junior representative for Australia
Early career Derby - Sligo is pretty light
Style of play should either be merged with the rest of the article or be at least a paragraph long.
The same with personal life. However, I believe more can be included. What about his family? Does he have another job? Does he have a weird obsession with toenails? Research.
References. Use a wider range. It will give you better information from several points of view.
(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline;
(b)
reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose); and