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This article doesn't seem serious at all. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 12.183.52.185 ( talk) 04:53, 15 January 2006
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Reviewer: Steelkamp ( talk · contribs) 13:12, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
Hello, I will be reviewing this article over the coming days. Good luck. Steelkamp ( talk) 13:12, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
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where he focused on restructuring government and higher education institutions and drug abuse legislation.– This could use a serial comma. Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
the general electionbe linked to 1972 North Carolina gubernatorial election? Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Early life
His mother was a registered member of the Democratic Party, though she eventually switched to independent status before becoming a Republican in 1972.– Is the term "independent" used for people who aren't politicians? I would switch this to
His mother was a registered member of the Democratic Party, though she eventually left the party before becoming a Republican in 1972.Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Early political career:
Throughout his tenure he focused on restructuring government and higher education institutions and drug abuse legislation.– Same as above. Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Gubernatorial career:
He decided to run in spite of his doctor's concerns about his health, as he was suffering from kidney disease.– Change this to
Suffering from kidney disease, he ran in spite of his doctor's concerns.Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Charlotte, Winston-Salem, Raleigh, and Wilmington– Could these be linked? Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
including five-year license plates– It's unclear to me what this means? Could it be clarified. Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
but Allen, Ramsey, and Hunt—all one day hoping to be governor—stopped these challenges.– Did these guys explicitly say they were hoping to be governor, or is the source just speculating they want to be governor. We can't know for sure unless they actually say they wanted to be governor. Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Ok, I'm satisfied the criteria are met. Passing the review now. Steelkamp ( talk) 07:49, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
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This article doesn't seem serious at all. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 12.183.52.185 ( talk) 04:53, 15 January 2006
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Reviewer: Steelkamp ( talk · contribs) 13:12, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
Hello, I will be reviewing this article over the coming days. Good luck. Steelkamp ( talk) 13:12, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
Lead:
where he focused on restructuring government and higher education institutions and drug abuse legislation.– This could use a serial comma. Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
the general electionbe linked to 1972 North Carolina gubernatorial election? Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Early life
His mother was a registered member of the Democratic Party, though she eventually switched to independent status before becoming a Republican in 1972.– Is the term "independent" used for people who aren't politicians? I would switch this to
His mother was a registered member of the Democratic Party, though she eventually left the party before becoming a Republican in 1972.Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Early political career:
Throughout his tenure he focused on restructuring government and higher education institutions and drug abuse legislation.– Same as above. Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Gubernatorial career:
He decided to run in spite of his doctor's concerns about his health, as he was suffering from kidney disease.– Change this to
Suffering from kidney disease, he ran in spite of his doctor's concerns.Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Charlotte, Winston-Salem, Raleigh, and Wilmington– Could these be linked? Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
including five-year license plates– It's unclear to me what this means? Could it be clarified. Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
but Allen, Ramsey, and Hunt—all one day hoping to be governor—stopped these challenges.– Did these guys explicitly say they were hoping to be governor, or is the source just speculating they want to be governor. We can't know for sure unless they actually say they wanted to be governor. Steelkamp ( talk) 09:44, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
Ok, I'm satisfied the criteria are met. Passing the review now. Steelkamp ( talk) 07:49, 19 July 2022 (UTC)