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Reviewer: Khazar2 ( talk · contribs) 02:07, 31 March 2013 (UTC)
Hi Schrocat, I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-5 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one--sorry you've had to wait so long for a review! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 02:07, 31 March 2013 (UTC)
I got distracted by a few other things, so unfortunately didn't make it through the full article tonight. Below are a few initial quibbles to start you off. I've also been doing some copyediting as I go for grammar, style, and minor MOS tweaks. Please double-check that I haven't inadvertently introduced any error, and feel free to revert anything you disagree with.
My preliminary impression is that this is looking good. Thanks for all your hard work to get this organized and up to its current quality! More tomorrow -- Khazar2 ( talk) 03:50, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
Made it through the Eon films, will finish tomorrow:
Wow, you and Betty are quick! Thanks for fixing all these things practically as fast as I can point them out. Only one thing left before I turn to the checklist:
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | Prose is excellent; spotchecks show no sign of copyright issues. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Pass |
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Hi Schrocat, I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-5 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one--sorry you've had to wait so long for a review! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 02:07, 31 March 2013 (UTC)
I got distracted by a few other things, so unfortunately didn't make it through the full article tonight. Below are a few initial quibbles to start you off. I've also been doing some copyediting as I go for grammar, style, and minor MOS tweaks. Please double-check that I haven't inadvertently introduced any error, and feel free to revert anything you disagree with.
My preliminary impression is that this is looking good. Thanks for all your hard work to get this organized and up to its current quality! More tomorrow -- Khazar2 ( talk) 03:50, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
Made it through the Eon films, will finish tomorrow:
Wow, you and Betty are quick! Thanks for fixing all these things practically as fast as I can point them out. Only one thing left before I turn to the checklist:
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | Prose is excellent; spotchecks show no sign of copyright issues. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Pass |