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Reviewer: Cloudz679 ( talk · contribs) 18:21, 14 January 2015 (UTC)
At this time, the prose at this article is full of jargon: "netting a brace", "grabbed an equaliser", "handed a start", "getting on the scoresheet", "rifling home", "netted", "nabbed his fourth goal of the term", "bagged his seventh goal"; and that is just a brief look at two paragraphs. The entire article would benefit from clearer prose, see section 1 of the Good article criteria. Quick failing. C 679 18:21, 14 January 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Cloudz679 ( talk · contribs) 18:21, 14 January 2015 (UTC)
At this time, the prose at this article is full of jargon: "netting a brace", "grabbed an equaliser", "handed a start", "getting on the scoresheet", "rifling home", "netted", "nabbed his fourth goal of the term", "bagged his seventh goal"; and that is just a brief look at two paragraphs. The entire article would benefit from clearer prose, see section 1 of the Good article criteria. Quick failing. C 679 18:21, 14 January 2015 (UTC)