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This article is horribly incomplete. A good article could almost be written on his athletic career, IMO. At least a separate section with a few paragraphs should detail his collegiate career. I am failing the article summarily without further review for this fault. I mentioned this opinion on the first GA review. The response was that the writer does not know football. This biography can not be properly written without an understnding of football. I am not just being mean here. I am the primary editor for Jack Kemp and would expect similar balance between athletics and politics in this article.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 03:39, 21 May 2009 (UTC) reply

I lived in Norman, Oklahoma for a couple of years in the 1960s and the Sooners were my favorite collegiate football program until I attended graduate School in Ann Arbor, Michigan in 1990. You should not attempt to promote this article to GA status until the article reminds me why I use to root for this guy.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 05:07, 21 May 2009 (UTC) reply