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Reviewer: Caponer ( talk · contribs) 20:25, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
Sturmvogel 66, I will complete a thorough and comprehensive review of this article within the next 48 hours. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns in the meantime. Thanks! -- Caponer ( talk) 20:25, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
Sturmvogel 66, I've completed my thorough and comprehensive review and re-review of this article, and I find that it meets all the criteria for passage to Good Article status. Prior its passage, however, I have shared below some comments and questions that should be addressed. Thanks again for all your hard work on this article. -- Caponer ( talk) 20:36, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
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I've added the information about the radio message to the lede and have expanded it in other ways as well. Given the short length of the article I see no need to link terms in both the lede and the main body.--
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Reviewer: Caponer ( talk · contribs) 20:25, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
Sturmvogel 66, I will complete a thorough and comprehensive review of this article within the next 48 hours. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns in the meantime. Thanks! -- Caponer ( talk) 20:25, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
Sturmvogel 66, I've completed my thorough and comprehensive review and re-review of this article, and I find that it meets all the criteria for passage to Good Article status. Prior its passage, however, I have shared below some comments and questions that should be addressed. Thanks again for all your hard work on this article. -- Caponer ( talk) 20:36, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
Lede
Design and description
Construction and career
I've added the information about the radio message to the lede and have expanded it in other ways as well. Given the short length of the article I see no need to link terms in both the lede and the main body.--
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22:35, 25 February 2015 (UTC)