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This article is in great shape. Just a few minor quibbles:
link displacement in the lead and body, and aft in the body, Mediterranean at first mention, Messina too
All done
suggest During one of the latter missions to attack the British Operation Harpoon convoy in June 1942,...
Good idea
the body length measurement has feet in decimals, should be ftin
Good catch
rounding doesn't match between the body and infobox for beam and draft
Fixed
the armor belt figures in the lead and infobox don't match the body
Fixed
the turret armor conversions are rounded in the infobox, but not in the body, probably applies to the conning tower too
Fixed
I imagine the 12.7 mm guns (and 13.2 mm guns) were actually machine guns, I assume the 13.2 was the Hotchkiss M1929 built under licence by Breda as the M31.
Yes, that's right
Do the sources say if the 20 mm and 37 mm guns were the Breda ones? If so, link.
Yes, but we don't have an article on the right 20mm gun.
In 1942, the
Good catch
suggest On 15 September 1930, Trento embarked on a cruise to the eastern Mediterranean that concluded in La Spezia on 21 November.
Works for me
File:Trento and Bolzano NH 86595.jpg needs a tweak of the description, it currently says both vessels are Bolzano
Good catch
link Dry dock
Done
was tasked with protecting
Good catch
suggest red stripes on the
Fixed
10 cm should probably be 100 mm for consistency
Fixed
the sentence beginning On 26 November is effectively repeated at the start of the next para
Removed
also, does that engagement have a name?
Right - I guess the link got deleted in rewriting that bit.
This article is well written, verifiable and well cited using reliable sources, covers the topic well, is neutral and stable, and all images are relevant, appear properly licensed and have appropriate captions. It meets the GA criteria. Passing.
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00:39, 10 February 2017 (UTC)reply
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This article is in great shape. Just a few minor quibbles:
link displacement in the lead and body, and aft in the body, Mediterranean at first mention, Messina too
All done
suggest During one of the latter missions to attack the British Operation Harpoon convoy in June 1942,...
Good idea
the body length measurement has feet in decimals, should be ftin
Good catch
rounding doesn't match between the body and infobox for beam and draft
Fixed
the armor belt figures in the lead and infobox don't match the body
Fixed
the turret armor conversions are rounded in the infobox, but not in the body, probably applies to the conning tower too
Fixed
I imagine the 12.7 mm guns (and 13.2 mm guns) were actually machine guns, I assume the 13.2 was the Hotchkiss M1929 built under licence by Breda as the M31.
Yes, that's right
Do the sources say if the 20 mm and 37 mm guns were the Breda ones? If so, link.
Yes, but we don't have an article on the right 20mm gun.
In 1942, the
Good catch
suggest On 15 September 1930, Trento embarked on a cruise to the eastern Mediterranean that concluded in La Spezia on 21 November.
Works for me
File:Trento and Bolzano NH 86595.jpg needs a tweak of the description, it currently says both vessels are Bolzano
Good catch
link Dry dock
Done
was tasked with protecting
Good catch
suggest red stripes on the
Fixed
10 cm should probably be 100 mm for consistency
Fixed
the sentence beginning On 26 November is effectively repeated at the start of the next para
Removed
also, does that engagement have a name?
Right - I guess the link got deleted in rewriting that bit.
This article is well written, verifiable and well cited using reliable sources, covers the topic well, is neutral and stable, and all images are relevant, appear properly licensed and have appropriate captions. It meets the GA criteria. Passing.
Peacemaker67 (
click to talk to me)
00:39, 10 February 2017 (UTC)reply