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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 01:19, 23 November 2014 (UTC) reply

I'll take this one. Comments as follows:

  • Infobox: Inconsistency between mm/cm in the armament section
    • Fixed
  • Service history: needs a clear statement that was intended for Ottoman Navy, as per lead.
    • Added, good catch.
  • wikilink Ottoman Empire and Austro-Hungarian
    • Added links
  • Doesn't explictly state the RM seized the ship as per lead
    • It's in the service history section where it discusses the ship's construction.
  • Missing word I think? "Instead, Revel decided to implement blockade"; should that be "implement a blockade"?
    • Fixed.

Checked duplicate and links; there are none. No images to review.

In summary, minor issues only; I'll check on progress in a few days. Zawed ( talk) 01:19, 23 November 2014 (UTC) reply

Thanks for reviewing the article, Zawed. Parsecboy ( talk) 13:11, 24 November 2014 (UTC) reply
Looks good, passing as GA. Zawed ( talk) 07:39, 27 November 2014 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 01:19, 23 November 2014 (UTC) reply

I'll take this one. Comments as follows:

  • Infobox: Inconsistency between mm/cm in the armament section
    • Fixed
  • Service history: needs a clear statement that was intended for Ottoman Navy, as per lead.
    • Added, good catch.
  • wikilink Ottoman Empire and Austro-Hungarian
    • Added links
  • Doesn't explictly state the RM seized the ship as per lead
    • It's in the service history section where it discusses the ship's construction.
  • Missing word I think? "Instead, Revel decided to implement blockade"; should that be "implement a blockade"?
    • Fixed.

Checked duplicate and links; there are none. No images to review.

In summary, minor issues only; I'll check on progress in a few days. Zawed ( talk) 01:19, 23 November 2014 (UTC) reply

Thanks for reviewing the article, Zawed. Parsecboy ( talk) 13:11, 24 November 2014 (UTC) reply
Looks good, passing as GA. Zawed ( talk) 07:39, 27 November 2014 (UTC) reply

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