This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Plot, "...as Mayor West proves more politically savvy than she", shouldn't "she" be "her"? Same section, same sentence, just a suggestion ---> "...as Mayor West proves to be more politically savvy than her", again just a suggestion.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Your concerns have been addressed.
Gage (
talk) 20:11, 1 July 2010 (UTC)reply
Thank you for addressing it, cause I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a
GA review. --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 20:13, 1 July 2010 (UTC)reply
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Plot, "...as Mayor West proves more politically savvy than she", shouldn't "she" be "her"? Same section, same sentence, just a suggestion ---> "...as Mayor West proves to be more politically savvy than her", again just a suggestion.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Your concerns have been addressed.
Gage (
talk) 20:11, 1 July 2010 (UTC)reply
Thank you for addressing it, cause I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a
GA review. --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 20:13, 1 July 2010 (UTC)reply