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Reviewer: Artem.G ( talk · contribs) 14:45, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I will be reviewing this article!
The article seems to be well-written and well-sourced; I will post some of my (minor) comments below, and would check the sources in the next few days. Artem.G ( talk) 14:45, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
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I've checked nearly half of the sources, and everything seems to be fine, sources are reliable and every claim is sourced; no OR was found; no images - so no problems here; you have very clear writing, and everything is done according to MoS; lead is ok. I see no reasons why it is not a GA. So, congrats, it's GA now!
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Someone with editing rights should fix a typo, "conversative" should be "conservative." — Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.139.165.244 ( talk) 18:15, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
This should be inserted in the "Spousal access to citizenship" section. -- 2A02:1810:BC04:4B00:88A9:1A3:54C4:BB4F ( talk) 16:10, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
the 3rd paragaraph of the intro states that non jews , esp palestinians, may have trouble getting citizenship this seems to understate how hard it is for palestinians to get citizenship, eg a palestinian MARRIED to an Israeli citizen cant get citizenship,iirc, the new law https://cyprus-mail.com/2022/03/10/israels-knesset-passes-law-barring-palestinian-spouses/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:192:4700:1F70:78E5:69EA:DFD9:557B ( talk) 13:56, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
@ Horserice: Why exactly are we omitting this section? That summary, in of itself, is not really a self-contained explanation. Aren't the rights and obligations of citizens pertinent here? Iskandar323 ( talk) 08:43, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
citizenship refers to the set of rights and duties a person has in that nationthen we may need a "Rights and duties" section. However, other citizenship articles I (quickly) checked didn't have such as section.
Can the article better explain that this is an honorific, and why. Otherwise, article looks very good. Well done again. Ceoil ( talk) 01:47, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
So I am adding the POV tag DMH43 ( talk) 16:48, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
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Hi. It currently says
"Palestinians resident in the West Bank and Gaza Strip regions of the former mandate largely remain stateless." But there is no source for this information. That is because it is untrue. The Palestinians living in the West Bank fall under the authority of the Palestinian Authority which issues it's own passports. As seen here ( https://palestinianaffairs.state.gov/message-to-u-s-citizens-u-s-citizens-with-a-palestinian-authority-pa-id-passport-can-apply-for-permits-for-short-term-visits-to-israel/) these are considered valid identification and travel documents by the US. Please remove the quoted section since it is untrue. Thanks and have a nice day. 1Rudster ( talk) 02:18, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
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"In the Israeli context, nationality is not linked to a person's origin from a particular territory but is more broadly defined. Although the term may be used in other countries to indicate a person's ethnic group, the meaning in Israeli law is particularly expansive by including any person practicing Judaism and their descendants."
Can someone explain why this is described as "broadly defined" and "particularly expansive"? Is this language used in the sources? On reading this description, neither characterization seems appropriate since the definition of nationality in this context seems exclusionary rather than "broad" and "expansive". DMH223344 ( talk) 17:24, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Artem.G ( talk · contribs) 14:45, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I will be reviewing this article!
The article seems to be well-written and well-sourced; I will post some of my (minor) comments below, and would check the sources in the next few days. Artem.G ( talk) 14:45, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
Comments/questions:
I've checked nearly half of the sources, and everything seems to be fine, sources are reliable and every claim is sourced; no OR was found; no images - so no problems here; you have very clear writing, and everything is done according to MoS; lead is ok. I see no reasons why it is not a GA. So, congrats, it's GA now!
Artem.G (
talk)
10:17, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
Someone with editing rights should fix a typo, "conversative" should be "conservative." — Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.139.165.244 ( talk) 18:15, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
This should be inserted in the "Spousal access to citizenship" section. -- 2A02:1810:BC04:4B00:88A9:1A3:54C4:BB4F ( talk) 16:10, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
the 3rd paragaraph of the intro states that non jews , esp palestinians, may have trouble getting citizenship this seems to understate how hard it is for palestinians to get citizenship, eg a palestinian MARRIED to an Israeli citizen cant get citizenship,iirc, the new law https://cyprus-mail.com/2022/03/10/israels-knesset-passes-law-barring-palestinian-spouses/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:192:4700:1F70:78E5:69EA:DFD9:557B ( talk) 13:56, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
@ Horserice: Why exactly are we omitting this section? That summary, in of itself, is not really a self-contained explanation. Aren't the rights and obligations of citizens pertinent here? Iskandar323 ( talk) 08:43, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
citizenship refers to the set of rights and duties a person has in that nationthen we may need a "Rights and duties" section. However, other citizenship articles I (quickly) checked didn't have such as section.
Can the article better explain that this is an honorific, and why. Otherwise, article looks very good. Well done again. Ceoil ( talk) 01:47, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
So I am adding the POV tag DMH43 ( talk) 16:48, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
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edit request has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
Hi. It currently says
"Palestinians resident in the West Bank and Gaza Strip regions of the former mandate largely remain stateless." But there is no source for this information. That is because it is untrue. The Palestinians living in the West Bank fall under the authority of the Palestinian Authority which issues it's own passports. As seen here ( https://palestinianaffairs.state.gov/message-to-u-s-citizens-u-s-citizens-with-a-palestinian-authority-pa-id-passport-can-apply-for-permits-for-short-term-visits-to-israel/) these are considered valid identification and travel documents by the US. Please remove the quoted section since it is untrue. Thanks and have a nice day. 1Rudster ( talk) 02:18, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
References
"In the Israeli context, nationality is not linked to a person's origin from a particular territory but is more broadly defined. Although the term may be used in other countries to indicate a person's ethnic group, the meaning in Israeli law is particularly expansive by including any person practicing Judaism and their descendants."
Can someone explain why this is described as "broadly defined" and "particularly expansive"? Is this language used in the sources? On reading this description, neither characterization seems appropriate since the definition of nationality in this context seems exclusionary rather than "broad" and "expansive". DMH223344 ( talk) 17:24, 6 March 2024 (UTC)