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It seems that the numbers of deaths under casualties and losses is different than the numbers in the referenced articles.
1. Please change "20 soldiers killed (3 non-combat)" to "14 soldiers killed (3 non-combat)" as these are the numbers mentioned in the sources. 2. Please change "89 civilians killed in Lebanon" to "82 civilians killed in Lebanon" as this is the number used in the source. 3. Please change "15 Syrian civilians killed" to "10 Syrian civilians killed". Source 31 is very outdated and mentions only 5 killed civilian and probably should be removed. Source 32 is more up to date and mentions 10 killed civilian. Guy Haddad 1 ( talk) 10:45, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Please change in the infobox from "10 civilians killed in Israel" to "11 civilians killed in Israel". Source used is source 38. Guy Haddad 1 ( talk) 10:49, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
you have to add: https://www.ynet.co.il/blogs/244dayswar 2.55.181.101 ( talk) 17:03, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: not moved. Favonian ( talk) 17:54, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
Israel鈥揌ezbollah conflict (2023鈥損resent) 鈫 Israel鈥揌ezbollah war (2023鈥損resent) 鈥 173.72.3.91 ( talk) 15:59, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
Change article name to Israel鈥揌ezbollah war (2023鈥損resent) 173.72.3.91 ( talk) 20:29, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
hezbollah death toll is 338/339 KIA. However I agree is not a all out war for it to be labeled as such. Conflict remains satisfactory term for now till however long. 109.144.19.150 ( talk) 17:17, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
I would recommend changing the color of the dashed line to something that contrasts more with the blue, if possible. Alternatively I suggest coloring the area a different shade or striping it. Evaporation123 ( talk) 19:23, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
https://www.newsweek.com/us-issues-warning-israel-lebanon-border-1912323 this source mentions 200k israelis have been evacuated from northern israel since oct 8th i think its best we add this number rather 96k from all the way in december 2023 Waterlover3 ( talk) 11:22, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
What happened to IDF casualties? They used to stand at 21 dead, now its 19. Has there been a revision towards lower death toll? Gorgedweller ( talk) 12:24, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
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add Yahya Sinwar to Commanders and leaders section as Hamas is in the Belligerents section and he is the leader of Hamas 173.72.3.91 ( talk) 03:20, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
The Israeli Representative to the UN announced that 150 Israeli Soldiers were killed and 15.000 were wounded on the northern front InfiniteValrath ( talk) 02:23, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi, in the casualties it says: "19 soldiers killed (3 non-combat)". Please change it to "18 soldiers killed (3 non-combat)", as this is the number used in the refrenced article.
In the description of the amount of Israeli soldiers casualties the article is being cited as:
"Fifteen soldiers and a local security officer have also been killed in attacks claimed by the Hezbollah and Palestinian Islamic Jihad terror groups on the border with Lebanon since the fighting started... The military's list also includes a soldier killed by friendly fire in the West Bank, a soldier killed due to malfunctioning ammunition on the Lebanon border, two soldiers killed in a tank accident in northern Israel, and a number of other deadly incidents amid the war but not directly related to the fighting."
But the "soldier killed by friendly fire in the West Bank" part isn't relevant to this article (and also covered by another wikipedia article here).
Additionaly, I suggest shortening the added description only to the relevnat parts:
"Fifteen soldiers and a local security officer have also been killed in attacks claimed by the Hezbollah and Palestinian Islamic Jihad terror groups on the border with Lebanon since the fighting started... The military's list also includes ... a soldier killed due to malfunctioning ammunition on the Lebanon border, two soldiers killed in a tank accident in northern Israel"
Guy Haddad 1 ( talk) 09:58, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi, there are some mistakes in Hezbollah and it's allies casualties:
Guy Haddad 1 ( talk) 09:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
In the inevitable event of an all out Israel lebanon/hezbollah war, would it be better to rename to war instead of conflict? DeadlyRampage26 ( talk) 13:45, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
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add July 2024 section to events as July has began and this conflict is still ongoing 173.72.3.91 ( talk) 20:01, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
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Hezbollah CLAIM their death TOLL is 359 (latest) , the source (l'orient) claims 450 which ONE IS TRUE? 2A00:23C8:180E:EE00:30A5:AD39:AF36:CDE ( talk) 20:58, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
聽Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a
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It seems that the numbers of deaths under casualties and losses is different than the numbers in the referenced articles.
1. Please change "20 soldiers killed (3 non-combat)" to "14 soldiers killed (3 non-combat)" as these are the numbers mentioned in the sources. 2. Please change "89 civilians killed in Lebanon" to "82 civilians killed in Lebanon" as this is the number used in the source. 3. Please change "15 Syrian civilians killed" to "10 Syrian civilians killed". Source 31 is very outdated and mentions only 5 killed civilian and probably should be removed. Source 32 is more up to date and mentions 10 killed civilian. Guy Haddad 1 ( talk) 10:45, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Please change in the infobox from "10 civilians killed in Israel" to "11 civilians killed in Israel". Source used is source 38. Guy Haddad 1 ( talk) 10:49, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
you have to add: https://www.ynet.co.il/blogs/244dayswar 2.55.181.101 ( talk) 17:03, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: not moved. Favonian ( talk) 17:54, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
Israel鈥揌ezbollah conflict (2023鈥損resent) 鈫 Israel鈥揌ezbollah war (2023鈥損resent) 鈥 173.72.3.91 ( talk) 15:59, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
Change article name to Israel鈥揌ezbollah war (2023鈥損resent) 173.72.3.91 ( talk) 20:29, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
hezbollah death toll is 338/339 KIA. However I agree is not a all out war for it to be labeled as such. Conflict remains satisfactory term for now till however long. 109.144.19.150 ( talk) 17:17, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
I would recommend changing the color of the dashed line to something that contrasts more with the blue, if possible. Alternatively I suggest coloring the area a different shade or striping it. Evaporation123 ( talk) 19:23, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
https://www.newsweek.com/us-issues-warning-israel-lebanon-border-1912323 this source mentions 200k israelis have been evacuated from northern israel since oct 8th i think its best we add this number rather 96k from all the way in december 2023 Waterlover3 ( talk) 11:22, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
What happened to IDF casualties? They used to stand at 21 dead, now its 19. Has there been a revision towards lower death toll? Gorgedweller ( talk) 12:24, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
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add Yahya Sinwar to Commanders and leaders section as Hamas is in the Belligerents section and he is the leader of Hamas 173.72.3.91 ( talk) 03:20, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
The Israeli Representative to the UN announced that 150 Israeli Soldiers were killed and 15.000 were wounded on the northern front InfiniteValrath ( talk) 02:23, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi, in the casualties it says: "19 soldiers killed (3 non-combat)". Please change it to "18 soldiers killed (3 non-combat)", as this is the number used in the refrenced article.
In the description of the amount of Israeli soldiers casualties the article is being cited as:
"Fifteen soldiers and a local security officer have also been killed in attacks claimed by the Hezbollah and Palestinian Islamic Jihad terror groups on the border with Lebanon since the fighting started... The military's list also includes a soldier killed by friendly fire in the West Bank, a soldier killed due to malfunctioning ammunition on the Lebanon border, two soldiers killed in a tank accident in northern Israel, and a number of other deadly incidents amid the war but not directly related to the fighting."
But the "soldier killed by friendly fire in the West Bank" part isn't relevant to this article (and also covered by another wikipedia article here).
Additionaly, I suggest shortening the added description only to the relevnat parts:
"Fifteen soldiers and a local security officer have also been killed in attacks claimed by the Hezbollah and Palestinian Islamic Jihad terror groups on the border with Lebanon since the fighting started... The military's list also includes ... a soldier killed due to malfunctioning ammunition on the Lebanon border, two soldiers killed in a tank accident in northern Israel"
Guy Haddad 1 ( talk) 09:58, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi, there are some mistakes in Hezbollah and it's allies casualties:
Guy Haddad 1 ( talk) 09:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
In the inevitable event of an all out Israel lebanon/hezbollah war, would it be better to rename to war instead of conflict? DeadlyRampage26 ( talk) 13:45, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
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add July 2024 section to events as July has began and this conflict is still ongoing 173.72.3.91 ( talk) 20:01, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
聽Already done
PianoDan (
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21:47, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
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Hezbollah CLAIM their death TOLL is 359 (latest) , the source (l'orient) claims 450 which ONE IS TRUE? 2A00:23C8:180E:EE00:30A5:AD39:AF36:CDE ( talk) 20:58, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
聽Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a
"change X to Y" format and provide a
reliable source if appropriate.
PianoDan (
talk)
21:47, 3 July 2024 (UTC)